Coupe

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  • Grito
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Coupe

The curtain
falls
in a meld,
maroon
fold
dimming
swells
the light.
The stage expectantly
surrenders,
grudgingly,
in clapping
thunders,
the class
of the last step,
to stop
in midairs'
flight,
a caress
as a silk slip
in
a dress
all red and black,
handling
a honed sensory attack.

A dancers shoes,
tipped in scarlet hues,
the violin creams
its resonance flares
and reminds,
a point in view
harbors
in this gaze sublime.

A smokey
start to all declare,
as a look above,
to and beyond,
the night star
I stare,
the deco buildings,
layered outside
the structure,
beside
the homeless clove,
asleep on the stair
of christian charity.

In a cameo of tan
and white,
aside
the silver cotton
breaded
napkin,
lays
a plum glaze
to the wine glass,
a fluid dense
in the aroma of dark
deep red
steeped
cherry
jewel
of lips,
slow
guided
steps,
along cool
blue walls
I glide
her red tress
above
white black dress
across
pale wooden floor,
in a pool
of colors
like honey
at a summers
gathering
to explore.

I adore
the aftermath,
melodic
ride into
Manhattan's maze
yellow traffic
blare
to
ooze,
West Side Highway burble
the environ of the heat lose,
G coupe,
Athens blue wings do
float me onto
dreams,
french hat
now on the supple
leather
miles all subtle,
in a crimson alabaster
flesh reprise,
musical notes follow,
as I do,
tis
a magical surprise
to
New York's Broadway skies.



© 2008

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tierra7 commented on Coupe

12-27-2009

such an exquisite write/ride....Sir Grito...you have such fine structure..and your writin' ability is remarkable....Namaste...Terra @}-'-,- (10+ )

Grito

12/27/2009

A great night on Broardway!!!

knight4696 commented on Coupe

11-23-2009

Wow Grito! An amazing write - the Imagey is outstanding and the storyline is great. I really enjoyed the ride! ...... Ken

Grito

11/24/2009

Thank you very much Ken, New York is a special place!!

lightcourier commented on Coupe

05-02-2009

marvelous drive. Thanks!

Grito

08/29/2009

It was my pleasure, thank you!!!

dahlusion commented on Coupe

04-21-2009

A delicious mouthful.

Grito

08/29/2009

LOL, thank you very much!!!

AIXA commented on Coupe

03-27-2009

Marvelous style, talented and colorful paradise

Grito

08/29/2009

Mil abrazos!!!

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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Red Shirt 7
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Velas 4
Star's 10
Shade 10
Gold 5
Vanity 11
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Is 7
Quarks 5
Storm 9
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Return 7
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See 5
Time 8
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Silver 3
Days 5
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Elevator 4
Taste 5
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Recital 2
Carousel 8
August 5
Dado 1
Terrace 3
Willow 2
Sueño 1
Blues 3
Shields 2
Choice 2
Encuentro 1
Canvas 2
Dreams 5
One(Senyru) 1
Rays 2
Temporal 1
Air 3
Vivo 1
Folds 3
Ave 2
Season 4
Sihouette 2
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Two 1
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Malla 1
Vuelven 2
3
Serious 5
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Stars 2
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Stones 3
A 1
Laughter 4
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Pennies 2
Powder 1
Vigil 1
Away 2
Kite(Wind) 3
Review(Violin
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2
Sax 3
Bedlam 3
Fruit 2
Is Was (Stone Wind Water and Air) 3
Feather 4
Pluma 1
Wind 3
Vino 1
Ochos 0
Pleiades 5
Rest 3
Free 2
Palmas 1
Miles 2
Gaugauin( Haiku) 2
Shore 2
Asleep(Senyru
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2
Ice(Senyru) 3
Harvest(Cinqu
ain)
1
Fruit 1
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Puma 0
Flux 0
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Aliento 1
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Wing 4
Balance 3
Anguish(Senyr
u)
2
Arc 4
Curso 2
Nado 3
Felt(Haiku) 2
Noche de Aixa 1
Visperas 1
Dias 1
Sailboat 2
Treat(Tanka) 1
Embrace(Senyr
u)
2
Celestial(Cin
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2
I C 4 I M 8
Lapel 6
Coupe 6
Seed 8
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White 10
She 6
Cream 5
Day 5
Flight 7
Aixa 4
Air, water and stone 7
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