White

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  • Grito
  • GRITO PASSED AWAY ON DECEMBER 17TH, 2010 All the poems I post here are my own and are © ed. Thank you for your visit!.

White

A featherly vane
molds my window screens,
on cool fall morns
that frost the scenes,
and there adorns,
sets thoughts to train
on what she means.

In the drifting showers,
as mallards preen,
she endures to glean
her ruby smiles draw me between
the forest lawns
set low and lean,
into the pass of paired wet swans,
furled white down flowers
that ripple and clean.

She is a lense,
a purity that slakes
the lilys fronds
all in their cultured greens,
but in the string of ponds
it is she I sense,
and want just what she means
along her rain swept lakes.

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ginga commented on White

12-29-2009

grito, Like a dove fluttering its wings, or a fresh leaf swaying downward in autumn, a trickle of spring water cascading over a rock, this poem is all that and more. The beauty of nature speaks to the reader w/o the reader even putting forth effort. Serendipitous! ginga

Grito

12/29/2009

Thank you very much for your excellent review kind Ginga!!!

SavVySam commented on White

12-25-2009

Exquisitely beautiful poem! I was just going to do some reading today~ HAD to stop and comment on this one! I love the the incredible imagery conveying so much meaning. Very nice work!

Grito

12/26/2009

It makes me very glad that you understood what I wrote because we both see in that special way.

tierra7 commented on White

12-24-2009

Beautiful !...i was swooned by..."it is she I sense, and want just what she means along her rain swept lakes." nature and its comparison to love are soooo invitin' to our innermost selves...thank you once 'gain Sir Grito...a true delight...Namaste...Terra @}-'-,- (10+ )

Grito

12/25/2009

Huds to most kind Tierra!!

Grito

12/25/2009

Hugss!!

paulwallhtown commented on White

12-12-2009

You are an amazing poet. Jademelissa74 sent me your way. Sh said I would like it and I did. Thanks man!

Grito

12/13/2009

Dear Jade is a special person for sure, it was very nice of her to send you hear, I appreciate your great review Paul, thank you very much!!

Tempestlady commented on White

11-14-2009

Who is she? The picture you paint reminds me of walks in the park as a dreamy young lady. Contmplative and full of pleasant visual imagery. Write on.......

Grito

11/15/2009

Right on the button Tempestlady, thank you very much for your review!!

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Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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