Risas

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  • Grito
  • GRITO PASSED AWAY ON DECEMBER 17TH, 2010 All the poems I post here are my own and are © ed. Thank you for your visit!.

Risas

Cuando
llueve,
me
recuerdo
de
las risas
que
me dabas.

Las gotitas,
asi
suenan,
y si
llegan,
pesadas,
como
lagrimas
de azucar
al fondo
de mi bien estar.

Ahi te busco
en momentos,
cuando
pienso,
cuando
rio,
cuando
lloro,
cuando
ya
no
puedo mas.

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tierra7 commented on Risas

12-24-2009

Pssssst..uuhhh ...I shall return ~smile~ Namaste Terra @}-'-,-

Grito

12/25/2009

Laughter When it rains, I remember all the laughter that you gave me. The droplets, so they sound, like globes of your laughter, yes they arrive, heavy, like tears of sugar to the base of my well being. There I seek you in those moments, when I think, when I laugh, when I cry, when I can no longer go on.

tierra7

12/25/2009

oh my Sir Grito.....this brought a bit of heaviness in my heart...mixed emotions....like the taste of not havin' your echo's breath or your hearts beat mirrored right back within reach...yet the feel of her heart in spirit brings that comfort right back to your bein'...becoz you both touch like no other can understand...and that touch from a distant picks you back up...i like it..it takes a love to transfer all positive energy flow ...quashin'all negativity and washin' it away...i knew this was worth a 10...Muy Bueno ~smile~I got a dictionary in hand.....Namsate, Terra @}-'-,-

Grito

12/25/2009

Mil gracias gentile Tierra!!!

wordCollective commented on Risas

06-08-2009

This was beautiful. While i was reading it, it reminded of my boyfriends smile. It always make me feel warm and safe. Your peom's purpose was served....

Grito

06/08/2009

Awww, that was so nice of you to say, such a great compliment, thank you most kind wordcollective!

jademelissa74 commented on Risas

06-07-2009

Muy elegante en cuerpo este poema. Me encanta come tu pintas los mensajes con vida, con mucho amor y sentimiento. Tienes talento, me gustan tus piezas!

Grito

06/10/2009

Mil gracias gentil Jade!!

AIXA commented on Risas

03-29-2009

Todos siempre necesitamos alguien por quien reir y alguien por quien llorar...

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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Title Comments
Luz (De los Andes) ® 13
Doris © 5
G.S.S.E.G.B.I
.J.B. (Prose) ©
5
Blue Inca Night (Verse) 38
Collection Schedule 6
Red Shirt 7
Camisa Roja 2
Libre (Free) 6
Sundown Diner 12
Starry Starry Night 10
Letter 11
Whispers 11
Velas 4
Star's 10
Shade 10
Gold 5
Vanity 11
Borne 8
Is 7
Quarks 5
Storm 9
Nihilist 7
Return 7
Light (Verse) 9
Against the Current (Space Prose) 7
Blancas 4
See 5
Time 8
Esa 2
Answer 7
Silver 3
Days 5
Luz 2
Elevator 4
Taste 5
Actias Luna 3
Recital 2
Carousel 8
August 5
Dado 1
Terrace 3
Willow 2
Sueño 1
Blues 3
Shields 2
Choice 2
Encuentro 1
Canvas 2
Dreams 5
One(Senyru) 1
Rays 2
Temporal 1
Air 3
Vivo 1
Folds 3
Ave 2
Season 4
Sihouette 2
Sky 2
Two 1
Valz 1
Malla 1
Vuelven 2
3
Serious 5
Chance 3
Coto Laurel 2
Stars 2
Estrellas 2
Centavos 1
Stones 3
A 1
Laughter 4
Beige 2
Feather(AIXA) 4
Pennies 2
Powder 1
Vigil 1
Away 2
Kite(Wind) 3
Review(Violin
)
2
Sax 3
Bedlam 3
Fruit 2
Is Was (Stone Wind Water and Air) 3
Feather 4
Pluma 1
Wind 3
Vino 1
Ochos 0
Pleiades 5
Rest 3
Free 2
Palmas 1
Miles 2
Gaugauin( Haiku) 2
Shore 2
Asleep(Senyru
)
2
Ice(Senyru) 3
Harvest(Cinqu
ain)
1
Fruit 1
Form 0
Puma 0
Flux 0
Esperandote 1
Anduvimos 1
Aliento 1
American Rose 4
Wing 4
Balance 3
Anguish(Senyr
u)
2
Arc 4
Curso 2
Nado 3
Felt(Haiku) 2
Noche de Aixa 1
Visperas 1
Dias 1
Sailboat 2
Treat(Tanka) 1
Embrace(Senyr
u)
2
Celestial(Cin
quain)
2
I C 4 I M 8
Lapel 6
Coupe 6
Seed 8
World's Play (Words Splay) 5
Risas 4
White 10
She 6
Cream 5
Day 5
Flight 7
Aixa 4
Air, water and stone 7
Bosom 6
Safe 5
Rapture 8
Mirage 7
Canto(Spanish
)
5
Lips 14
Cresent Moon(Prose) 12
Ferns 6
Drops 10
Pass(Verse) 5
Snow Flakes(Prose) 6
Shell 11
Play 12