Velas

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  • Grito
  • GRITO PASSED AWAY ON DECEMBER 17TH, 2010 All the poems I post here are my own and are © ed. Thank you for your visit!.

Velas

Si escaso y animadó,
la noche me arrastrara cercano,
como si con la oscuridad hubiera conspirado
y me había lanzado por el cielo.

Agudas de un piano, las notas 
recorren por las nubes ambientes.
Ellas cantan una canción a violín de los otoños
y observan la mirada de mantos pasajeros.

En algún lugar a lo lejos,
con mi sangre continúan venas rojas, 
en un barco de todo oro y velas vibrantes,
donde en mi corazón mi amor se demora.

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tierra7 commented on Velas

12-26-2009

Sir Grito.....did you say Grito meant Scream??? well Sir...i'm Gritoin'.......HELP !!! ~SMILE~ whisperin'...translation please...i have noticed there are others....may i bother you for those translations as well? ty ever so kindly in advance...Namaste ..Terra @}-'-,-

Grito

12/27/2009

Done Tierra, please let me know what yopu think of the poem!!!

tierra7

01/06/2010

Maestro, what can i say???...your the Creator...ty for the translation...this was totally Awesome!...you know how to capture your audience.... Namaste...Terra @}-'-,- (10+ )

knight4696 commented on Velas

12-20-2009

LOL!!! Amadeus ...... my sentiments exactly! :)

Grito

12/21/2009

Hi Ken, I sent you a translation of the poem, I hope you like it!!!

AIXA commented on Velas

12-12-2009

Wait for me!!! With heavenly powers protect me at all times, bring me to the light so I can be with you in this and my next life, always holding me tight, traveling together from time to time!

Grito

12/13/2009

Como siempre, te adoro y te espero.

AmadeusEx commented on Velas

12-07-2009

i cannot read spanish...lol...thought id give it a shot but my half hearted attempt in highschool spanish classes definitely did not prepare me for this poem...you should post an english translation of it

Grito

12/08/2009

I'll send you a translation AmadeusEx.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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G.S.S.E.G.B.I
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Collection Schedule 6
Red Shirt 7
Camisa Roja 2
Libre (Free) 6
Sundown Diner 12
Starry Starry Night 10
Letter 11
Whispers 11
Velas 4
Star's 10
Shade 10
Gold 5
Vanity 11
Borne 8
Is 7
Quarks 5
Storm 9
Nihilist 7
Return 7
Light (Verse) 9
Against the Current (Space Prose) 7
Blancas 4
See 5
Time 8
Esa 2
Answer 7
Silver 3
Days 5
Luz 2
Elevator 4
Taste 5
Actias Luna 3
Recital 2
Carousel 8
August 5
Dado 1
Terrace 3
Willow 2
Sueño 1
Blues 3
Shields 2
Choice 2
Encuentro 1
Canvas 2
Dreams 5
One(Senyru) 1
Rays 2
Temporal 1
Air 3
Vivo 1
Folds 3
Ave 2
Season 4
Sihouette 2
Sky 2
Two 1
Valz 1
Malla 1
Vuelven 2
3
Serious 5
Chance 3
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Stars 2
Estrellas 2
Centavos 1
Stones 3
A 1
Laughter 4
Beige 2
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Pennies 2
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Vigil 1
Away 2
Kite(Wind) 3
Review(Violin
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Sax 3
Bedlam 3
Fruit 2
Is Was (Stone Wind Water and Air) 3
Feather 4
Pluma 1
Wind 3
Vino 1
Ochos 0
Pleiades 5
Rest 3
Free 2
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Miles 2
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Ice(Senyru) 3
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Celestial(Cin
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She 6
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