Gold

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  • Grito
  • GRITO PASSED AWAY ON DECEMBER 17TH, 2010 All the poems I post here are my own and are © ed. Thank you for your visit!.

Gold

If sparse and emboldened
the night would drag me nigh,
as if with the dark it had conspired
and flung me through the sky.

The sharp notes of a piano,
course through the ambient clouds.
They sing a violin song of autumn
and eye the look of passing shrouds.
 

Somewhere in the distance
red veins my blood do carry
on a vessel all gold and vibrant
where in my heart my son does tarry.

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tierra7 commented on Gold

12-27-2009

awwwww lovely are the colors you chose for this...like the aura of many present......the serenity is sooo perfect...the love is so pure...the connection is soooooo tight......this is a fantastic tribute to your son whom you carry in your heart...for ever more as he does for you...i love family tributes they cleanse my sinuses...( sniff sniff) Namaste...Terra @}-'-,- (10+)

Grito

12/28/2009

All love is Gold kind Tierra, thank you very much for your excellent review!!

knight4696 commented on Gold

12-27-2009

Grito - What a beautiful tribute to your son. The depth and imagery are both vivid and beautiful - Great Job! ... Ken

Grito

12/28/2009

Thanks Ken, our children are us!!!

AIXA commented on Gold

11-15-2009

I see the inmense love you have for your son, you are in his mind and in his loving heart.

Grito

11/15/2009

Muchas gracias gentile querida!!!

Tempestlady commented on Gold

11-14-2009

That's pretty deep. Much symbolism to follow. Seems like sounds on the winds of a wave. Maybe family sounds. Which sun/son? Made me wonder. Very welcome challenge, mine are so often almost all on the surface. Gave me some ideas. Write on......

Grito

11/15/2009

Very glad to read that it gave you some ideas, thank you for your great review Tempestlady!!!

dancinghawk commented on Gold

11-04-2009

is this a lead-up to "jesus is the reason for the season" ? if so, you've said it better, lol ... happy Wednesday, Grito :) -dh

Grito

11/04/2009

It is to my son, happy Wednesday to you too DH!!!

dancinghawk

11/05/2009

beautiful ... thx for the insight! -dh

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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Doris © 5
G.S.S.E.G.B.I
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Blue Inca Night (Verse) 38
Collection Schedule 6
Red Shirt 7
Camisa Roja 2
Libre (Free) 6
Sundown Diner 12
Starry Starry Night 10
Letter 11
Whispers 11
Velas 4
Star's 10
Shade 10
Gold 5
Vanity 11
Borne 8
Is 7
Quarks 5
Storm 9
Nihilist 7
Return 7
Light (Verse) 9
Against the Current (Space Prose) 7
Blancas 4
See 5
Time 8
Esa 2
Answer 7
Silver 3
Days 5
Luz 2
Elevator 4
Taste 5
Actias Luna 3
Recital 2
Carousel 8
August 5
Dado 1
Terrace 3
Willow 2
Sueño 1
Blues 3
Shields 2
Choice 2
Encuentro 1
Canvas 2
Dreams 5
One(Senyru) 1
Rays 2
Temporal 1
Air 3
Vivo 1
Folds 3
Ave 2
Season 4
Sihouette 2
Sky 2
Two 1
Valz 1
Malla 1
Vuelven 2
3
Serious 5
Chance 3
Coto Laurel 2
Stars 2
Estrellas 2
Centavos 1
Stones 3
A 1
Laughter 4
Beige 2
Feather(AIXA) 4
Pennies 2
Powder 1
Vigil 1
Away 2
Kite(Wind) 3
Review(Violin
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2
Sax 3
Bedlam 3
Fruit 2
Is Was (Stone Wind Water and Air) 3
Feather 4
Pluma 1
Wind 3
Vino 1
Ochos 0
Pleiades 5
Rest 3
Free 2
Palmas 1
Miles 2
Gaugauin( Haiku) 2
Shore 2
Asleep(Senyru
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2
Ice(Senyru) 3
Harvest(Cinqu
ain)
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Fruit 1
Form 0
Puma 0
Flux 0
Esperandote 1
Anduvimos 1
Aliento 1
American Rose 4
Wing 4
Balance 3
Anguish(Senyr
u)
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Arc 4
Curso 2
Nado 3
Felt(Haiku) 2
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Visperas 1
Dias 1
Sailboat 2
Treat(Tanka) 1
Embrace(Senyr
u)
2
Celestial(Cin
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I C 4 I M 8
Lapel 6
Coupe 6
Seed 8
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White 10
She 6
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Flight 7
Aixa 4
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