• Grito
  • GRITO PASSED AWAY ON DECEMBER 17TH, 2010 All the poems I post here are my own and are © ed. Thank you for your visit!.

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I saw your face
this cool fall.
On my finger tips
was left
your taste,
my lust,
the grace
of your lips,
distilled
in the sun warmed
huddle of the oak leaves
play
above the eves,
my thoughts bring it back to me:


It is you that I long to see.


  © 2009

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Rhymer commented on Play

12-25-2009

Excellent imagery your words bring to mind, nice piece. 10 from me.

Grito

12/25/2009

Thank you for your peaceful review kind Rhymer!!

tierra7 commented on Play

12-23-2009

such lovely words from a soul whom has great love for his one and only true Love...love your words Sir Grito.... well deservin' of a high 10...Namaste..Terra @}-'-,-

Grito

12/23/2009

Thank you very much for your most gracious review kind Tierra!!!

AIXA commented on Play

12-04-2009

Dedicated to you!. "Grito" ORION'S BELT In a bright, starry sky I seek Orion’s Belt’ Those three little bears always make my heart Melt As they carry me back to a clear, winter night When we talked and we talked and it all seemed So right. When we sat side-by-side in the cool, quiet air And we sifted the stars as we hunted for bear. When we shared from a glass and we sipped each In turn. When I hung on your words, your life story to Learn. When we spoke of our pain and we spoke of our Fears With intimate voices so no one else hears. When we trusted enough to deep secrets reveal. When our friendship was forged. When our Happiness real. Now, though time has passed and we’ve walked Holding hands, I’ll find you in the stars to the end of my days. Love always, AIXA

Grito

12/04/2009

Si escaso y animadó, la noche me arrastrara cercano, como si con la oscuridad hubiera conspirado y me había lanzado por el cielo. Las notas agudas de un piano, corren por las nubes ambientes. Ellos cantan una canción de violín de otoño y observan la mirada de mantos pasajeros. En algún lugar a lo lejos, venas rojas con mi sangre continúan, un barco de todo oro y vibrante, donde en mi corazón mi Axia se demora.

knight4696 commented on Play

11-16-2009

Grito- Beautiful imagery in this one and a very nice romantic plea. Nice Job! Ken

Grito

11/16/2009

Thank you very much Ken, I appreciate your great reviews!!!

dancinghawk commented on Play

11-04-2009

oh, Beautiful, Grito! true Rumi ... the subject clear, the object open ... lovely ... -dh

Grito

11/05/2009

I am very flattered by your Rumi reference, I am reasearching him for sure. Thank you kind DH!!

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

Grito’s Poems (148)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Luz (De los Andes) ® 13
Doris © 5
G.S.S.E.G.B.I
.J.B. (Prose) ©
5
Blue Inca Night (Verse) 38
Collection Schedule 6
Red Shirt 7
Camisa Roja 2
Libre (Free) 6
Sundown Diner 12
Starry Starry Night 10
Letter 11
Whispers 11
Velas 4
Star's 10
Shade 10
Gold 5
Vanity 11
Borne 8
Is 7
Quarks 5
Storm 9
Nihilist 7
Return 7
Light (Verse) 9
Against the Current (Space Prose) 7
Blancas 4
See 5
Time 8
Esa 2
Answer 7
Silver 3
Days 5
Luz 2
Elevator 4
Taste 5
Actias Luna 3
Recital 2
Carousel 8
August 5
Dado 1
Terrace 3
Willow 2
Sueño 1
Blues 3
Shields 2
Choice 2
Encuentro 1
Canvas 2
Dreams 5
One(Senyru) 1
Rays 2
Temporal 1
Air 3
Vivo 1
Folds 3
Ave 2
Season 4
Sihouette 2
Sky 2
Two 1
Valz 1
Malla 1
Vuelven 2
3
Serious 5
Chance 3
Coto Laurel 2
Stars 2
Estrellas 2
Centavos 1
Stones 3
A 1
Laughter 4
Beige 2
Feather(AIXA) 4
Pennies 2
Powder 1
Vigil 1
Away 2
Kite(Wind) 3
Review(Violin
)
2
Sax 3
Bedlam 3
Fruit 2
Is Was (Stone Wind Water and Air) 3
Feather 4
Pluma 1
Wind 3
Vino 1
Ochos 0
Pleiades 5
Rest 3
Free 2
Palmas 1
Miles 2
Gaugauin( Haiku) 2
Shore 2
Asleep(Senyru
)
2
Ice(Senyru) 3
Harvest(Cinqu
ain)
1
Fruit 1
Form 0
Puma 0
Flux 0
Esperandote 1
Anduvimos 1
Aliento 1
American Rose 4
Wing 4
Balance 3
Anguish(Senyr
u)
2
Arc 4
Curso 2
Nado 3
Felt(Haiku) 2
Noche de Aixa 1
Visperas 1
Dias 1
Sailboat 2
Treat(Tanka) 1
Embrace(Senyr
u)
2
Celestial(Cin
quain)
2
I C 4 I M 8
Lapel 6
Coupe 6
Seed 8
World's Play (Words Splay) 5
Risas 4
White 10
She 6
Cream 5
Day 5
Flight 7
Aixa 4
Air, water and stone 7
Bosom 6
Safe 5
Rapture 8
Mirage 7
Canto(Spanish
)
5
Lips 14
Cresent Moon(Prose) 12
Ferns 6
Drops 10
Pass(Verse) 5
Snow Flakes(Prose) 6
Shell 11
Play 12