Red Shirt

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  • Grito
  • GRITO PASSED AWAY ON DECEMBER 17TH, 2010 All the poems I post here are my own and are © ed. Thank you for your visit!.

Red Shirt

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Red Shirt
I am now
letting you go.

You are a gift
so you know,
 to fly a black orange fast
Florida night.

In the air you
I'll see
free, free,
you are me.

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StandingBear commented on Red Shirt

01-24-2010

Ride to live .. live to ride! Ride fast Grito .. efficiently!

Grito

01/24/2010

Hi SBear, thank you very much for your excellent review!!!

LenaMP commented on Red Shirt

01-17-2010

Nice poem and sweet ride. There is nothing quite like riding out in the open air with all that power beneath your seat.

Grito

01/18/2010

I so agree kind Lena, thank you very much for your excellent review!!!

jademelissa74 commented on Red Shirt

12-28-2009

Sweet thought on riding free, to where the air may lead the spirit...a perfect plan for the new year and if I may add, a wonderful metaphor as well. Thanks Ivan!

Grito

12/28/2009

Blessings for your sweet thoughts and understannding Kind Erika!!!

tierra7 commented on Red Shirt

12-27-2009

outstandin'........waaaaaaay .....tooo kewel...i like....i like alot......bein' one whom loves to ride...this hit the ridin' spot...you go Grito...soar w/the eagles.....i appreciate this write/ride...Namaste...Terra @}-'-,- (10+ )

Grito

12/28/2009

Grab your helmet and let's go Tierra!!!

knight4696 commented on Red Shirt

12-27-2009

Easy Rider - Rides again! :) Love it! - Ride on my friend! :) Ken

Grito

12/27/2009

Looking to springtime on a ride!!!

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

Grito’s Poems (148)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Luz (De los Andes) ® 13
Doris © 5
G.S.S.E.G.B.I
.J.B. (Prose) ©
5
Blue Inca Night (Verse) 38
Collection Schedule 6
Red Shirt 7
Camisa Roja 2
Libre (Free) 6
Sundown Diner 12
Starry Starry Night 10
Letter 11
Whispers 11
Velas 4
Star's 10
Shade 10
Gold 5
Vanity 11
Borne 8
Is 7
Quarks 5
Storm 9
Nihilist 7
Return 7
Light (Verse) 9
Against the Current (Space Prose) 7
Blancas 4
See 5
Time 8
Esa 2
Answer 7
Silver 3
Days 5
Luz 2
Elevator 4
Taste 5
Actias Luna 3
Recital 2
Carousel 8
August 5
Dado 1
Terrace 3
Willow 2
Sueño 1
Blues 3
Shields 2
Choice 2
Encuentro 1
Canvas 2
Dreams 5
One(Senyru) 1
Rays 2
Temporal 1
Air 3
Vivo 1
Folds 3
Ave 2
Season 4
Sihouette 2
Sky 2
Two 1
Valz 1
Malla 1
Vuelven 2
3
Serious 5
Chance 3
Coto Laurel 2
Stars 2
Estrellas 2
Centavos 1
Stones 3
A 1
Laughter 4
Beige 2
Feather(AIXA) 4
Pennies 2
Powder 1
Vigil 1
Away 2
Kite(Wind) 3
Review(Violin
)
2
Sax 3
Bedlam 3
Fruit 2
Is Was (Stone Wind Water and Air) 3
Feather 4
Pluma 1
Wind 3
Vino 1
Ochos 0
Pleiades 5
Rest 3
Free 2
Palmas 1
Miles 2
Gaugauin( Haiku) 2
Shore 2
Asleep(Senyru
)
2
Ice(Senyru) 3
Harvest(Cinqu
ain)
1
Fruit 1
Form 0
Puma 0
Flux 0
Esperandote 1
Anduvimos 1
Aliento 1
American Rose 4
Wing 4
Balance 3
Anguish(Senyr
u)
2
Arc 4
Curso 2
Nado 3
Felt(Haiku) 2
Noche de Aixa 1
Visperas 1
Dias 1
Sailboat 2
Treat(Tanka) 1
Embrace(Senyr
u)
2
Celestial(Cin
quain)
2
I C 4 I M 8
Lapel 6
Coupe 6
Seed 8
World's Play (Words Splay) 5
Risas 4
White 10
She 6
Cream 5
Day 5
Flight 7
Aixa 4
Air, water and stone 7
Bosom 6
Safe 5
Rapture 8
Mirage 7
Canto(Spanish
)
5
Lips 14
Cresent Moon(Prose) 12
Ferns 6
Drops 10
Pass(Verse) 5
Snow Flakes(Prose) 6
Shell 11
Play 12