Whispers

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  • Grito
  • GRITO PASSED AWAY ON DECEMBER 17TH, 2010 All the poems I post here are my own and are © ed. Thank you for your visit!.

Whispers

Song that acompanies poem:
http://new.music.yahoo.com/videos/Creed/One-Last-Breath--2154998


The winter cold, it's freeze today,
sun's thoughts has blustered quick.
Came from behind, a shroud so thick,
its bitter taste has made me pray.

My eyes cast down as the ivy slows
weeps but a trickle with no pain.
Black Angel has come but no anger shows
as she whispers softly in my brain.


Truth sucked the sweetness from the vine,
frail fringed tale yet so dark and deep.
Her hand on me laid down to sleep, 
bequeaths earth's dusk my pillow fine.

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tierra7 commented on Whispers

12-26-2009

lovely....yet i find sadness in many more ways...yet...love never fades...brings it back to a sweet surrender...Sir Grito...the perfection in your work is soooo delicate and amazin'.....ty for a sincere share...and the misic went along so well in the pairin''' Namaste..Terra @}-'-,- (10+ )

Grito

12/27/2009

Thank you for your excellent review Tierra, I was hoping that the song would be compatable with the poem!!!

jademelissa74 commented on Whispers

12-22-2009

"So take from me what you will for the depth I own is enough, whatever need you bring my way... I know your fears I will allay." Ivan, this piece is soothing...it captures the essence of life well....The correlation of nature with love is always a trade. You are amazing my friend!

Grito

12/22/2009

Muchas gracias por ser tan amamble gentil Jade!!!

knight4696 commented on Whispers

12-20-2009

Grito - Great write and hear my friend! :) Love the linking idea - Creed's great and it fit this poem perfectly! Great Job! ... Ken

Grito

12/21/2009

Thanks Ken, I am glad you liked the Creed video and poem link, thank you veryu much for your greatr review and visit!!!

SavVySam commented on Whispers

12-19-2009

A darkly lovely poem, with fine images and a fresh style. Your line "truth sucked sweetness from the vine" perfection! I liked this a lot! ~I have seen many of your comments and was intrigued...glad I came to have a look. Thank you!

Grito

12/19/2009

Thank you very much for your review and visit SaVy!!!

ginga commented on Whispers

12-14-2009

Ahh such a tableau of finery these words. As melancholy as the write is I truly can feel enveloped in its precious message. ginga

Grito

12/14/2009

Thank you very much for your most great review gracious Ginga!!!

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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