Safe

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  • Grito
  • GRITO PASSED AWAY ON DECEMBER 17TH, 2010 All the poems I post here are my own and are © ed. Thank you for your visit!.

Safe

A tap
to the drop
as rain collects,
then hesitates,
in its fall.
No call
of distress
in the swan dive
to address
from the leaf.

My thoughts
eye
the liquid grass
for relief.
I sense
the North Star
block
all grief.
She is my rock,
my safe stellar reef.

I swim
to her bosom
and she watches
my eyes
close
as we dream
 from within the drop, 
we are the sound of the tap,
as the drop falls in it's leap.



 © 2009

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knight4696 commented on Safe

12-26-2009

Sir Grito - The master of Nature's romance! The depths that you capture and the imagery you convey in such few words is superb! Great Job! ..... Ken

Grito

12/26/2009

I love your review, thank you so very much Sir Knight!!!

tierra7 commented on Safe

12-23-2009

very inspirin'....Sir Grito...i find all you pen to be very inspirin' i feel so honored to be able to open your work and read..you forward so much passion so much desiore in all you creat...each has hands that pave the way so that we may have the pleasure to relax in our own domain...with such fine words...and that's what i did so again today with tea close by..readin' words of a fine poet..now i can say yes i know the man...he is my friend...his name is Grito... Fantastic.! you Rock ! Namaste..Terra @}-'-,- (10+ )

Grito

12/23/2009

We are more than friends Tierra, we are kindred spirits, thank you very much for your great review and visit!!!

quickwrite commented on Safe

09-02-2009

Wonderful, I really respect poets who say alot with few words.

Grito

09/02/2009

Thank you quickwrite!!!

AIXA commented on Safe

03-29-2009

She is your morning dew.

Grito

08/29/2009

Besos y abrazos!!!

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Doris © 5
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Collection Schedule 6
Red Shirt 7
Camisa Roja 2
Libre (Free) 6
Sundown Diner 12
Starry Starry Night 10
Letter 11
Whispers 11
Velas 4
Star's 10
Shade 10
Gold 5
Vanity 11
Borne 8
Is 7
Quarks 5
Storm 9
Nihilist 7
Return 7
Light (Verse) 9
Against the Current (Space Prose) 7
Blancas 4
See 5
Time 8
Esa 2
Answer 7
Silver 3
Days 5
Luz 2
Elevator 4
Taste 5
Actias Luna 3
Recital 2
Carousel 8
August 5
Dado 1
Terrace 3
Willow 2
Sueño 1
Blues 3
Shields 2
Choice 2
Encuentro 1
Canvas 2
Dreams 5
One(Senyru) 1
Rays 2
Temporal 1
Air 3
Vivo 1
Folds 3
Ave 2
Season 4
Sihouette 2
Sky 2
Two 1
Valz 1
Malla 1
Vuelven 2
3
Serious 5
Chance 3
Coto Laurel 2
Stars 2
Estrellas 2
Centavos 1
Stones 3
A 1
Laughter 4
Beige 2
Feather(AIXA) 4
Pennies 2
Powder 1
Vigil 1
Away 2
Kite(Wind) 3
Review(Violin
)
2
Sax 3
Bedlam 3
Fruit 2
Is Was (Stone Wind Water and Air) 3
Feather 4
Pluma 1
Wind 3
Vino 1
Ochos 0
Pleiades 5
Rest 3
Free 2
Palmas 1
Miles 2
Gaugauin( Haiku) 2
Shore 2
Asleep(Senyru
)
2
Ice(Senyru) 3
Harvest(Cinqu
ain)
1
Fruit 1
Form 0
Puma 0
Flux 0
Esperandote 1
Anduvimos 1
Aliento 1
American Rose 4
Wing 4
Balance 3
Anguish(Senyr
u)
2
Arc 4
Curso 2
Nado 3
Felt(Haiku) 2
Noche de Aixa 1
Visperas 1
Dias 1
Sailboat 2
Treat(Tanka) 1
Embrace(Senyr
u)
2
Celestial(Cin
quain)
2
I C 4 I M 8
Lapel 6
Coupe 6
Seed 8
World's Play (Words Splay) 5
Risas 4
White 10
She 6
Cream 5
Day 5
Flight 7
Aixa 4
Air, water and stone 7
Bosom 6
Safe 5
Rapture 8
Mirage 7
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Lips 14
Cresent Moon(Prose) 12
Ferns 6
Drops 10
Pass(Verse) 5
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Play 12