Light (Verse)

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  • Grito
  • GRITO PASSED AWAY ON DECEMBER 17TH, 2010 All the poems I post here are my own and are © ed. Thank you for your visit!.

Light (Verse)

See how the light
in the morning
is lit
over the flower. 

Just as I am lit
by the light
of your love. 

See how the light
in the morning
flames when it is lit 
over the flower. 

Just as I am enflamed
when I am lit
by the dawn of the lights
of your love.  


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tierra7 commented on Light (Verse)

12-28-2009

awwww Ivan this is such..... an Eloquent read... , her radiant energy burns thru you........ as you flourishes Loves garden....your both on fire !!!! ~smile~ such Blessed moments are such engagements.......MUY BONITO !! AMIGO.... Namaste...Terra @}-'-.- (10+ )

tierra7

12/28/2009

OOPS! typo~ "Flourish"...i tend to have a pc accent at times ~smile~ sorrrry~

Grito

12/28/2009

What a wonderful way to be!!!

dancinghawk commented on Light (Verse)

12-28-2009

ah, Grito, you are a lovely light in the wilderness ... ty so much for this beautiful piece ... to the "faves" it goes ... looking forward to sharing this with my sweetheart ... -dh

Grito

12/28/2009

Dancing, Dancing, you are special, it is my honor that you are sharinmg it with your Sweetie, thank you very much!!!

bloomingsun commented on Light (Verse)

12-28-2009

beautiful and simple, the emotion of this shines brightly. Great write, very romantic and passionate.

Grito

12/28/2009

Thank you very much for your excellent review Bloomingsun!!!

knight4696 commented on Light (Verse)

12-28-2009

Beautiful Sentiments shine from the Light written in this verse! Romantic and deeply emotional! Awesome job my friend! ...Ken

Grito

12/28/2009

Thank you for your excellent review kind Ken!!!

bforibus commented on Light (Verse)

11-06-2009

i love the dancing in the rain feeling that i sense this character to be in. this is a greatly emotional piece and i loved it.

Grito

11/06/2009

Thank you very much for your great review and visit kind Bforibus!!!

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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Doris © 5
G.S.S.E.G.B.I
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Blue Inca Night (Verse) 38
Collection Schedule 6
Red Shirt 7
Camisa Roja 2
Libre (Free) 6
Sundown Diner 12
Starry Starry Night 10
Letter 11
Whispers 11
Velas 4
Star's 10
Shade 10
Gold 5
Vanity 11
Borne 8
Is 7
Quarks 5
Storm 9
Nihilist 7
Return 7
Light (Verse) 9
Against the Current (Space Prose) 7
Blancas 4
See 5
Time 8
Esa 2
Answer 7
Silver 3
Days 5
Luz 2
Elevator 4
Taste 5
Actias Luna 3
Recital 2
Carousel 8
August 5
Dado 1
Terrace 3
Willow 2
Sueño 1
Blues 3
Shields 2
Choice 2
Encuentro 1
Canvas 2
Dreams 5
One(Senyru) 1
Rays 2
Temporal 1
Air 3
Vivo 1
Folds 3
Ave 2
Season 4
Sihouette 2
Sky 2
Two 1
Valz 1
Malla 1
Vuelven 2
3
Serious 5
Chance 3
Coto Laurel 2
Stars 2
Estrellas 2
Centavos 1
Stones 3
A 1
Laughter 4
Beige 2
Feather(AIXA) 4
Pennies 2
Powder 1
Vigil 1
Away 2
Kite(Wind) 3
Review(Violin
)
2
Sax 3
Bedlam 3
Fruit 2
Is Was (Stone Wind Water and Air) 3
Feather 4
Pluma 1
Wind 3
Vino 1
Ochos 0
Pleiades 5
Rest 3
Free 2
Palmas 1
Miles 2
Gaugauin( Haiku) 2
Shore 2
Asleep(Senyru
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2
Ice(Senyru) 3
Harvest(Cinqu
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1
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Form 0
Puma 0
Flux 0
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Anduvimos 1
Aliento 1
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Wing 4
Balance 3
Anguish(Senyr
u)
2
Arc 4
Curso 2
Nado 3
Felt(Haiku) 2
Noche de Aixa 1
Visperas 1
Dias 1
Sailboat 2
Treat(Tanka) 1
Embrace(Senyr
u)
2
Celestial(Cin
quain)
2
I C 4 I M 8
Lapel 6
Coupe 6
Seed 8
World's Play (Words Splay) 5
Risas 4
White 10
She 6
Cream 5
Day 5
Flight 7
Aixa 4
Air, water and stone 7
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Safe 5
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Play 12