Flight

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  • Grito
  • GRITO PASSED AWAY ON DECEMBER 17TH, 2010 All the poems I post here are my own and are © ed. Thank you for your visit!.

Flight

A bumblebee
a flight on wings
translucent and perplexing.

The flower brings
her scented thrill
into his path directed.

They both can see
their lighted paths
are joined and intersected.

He glides to land
her colors grand
he soaks up all her blessings.

They are as one
verbose and sweet
the promise is in the making.

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tierra7 commented on Flight

12-24-2009

this is a rare beauty...simply adorable paintin' for us to become a part of...lovely..ty for the sweet share... i will come back and review some more. Merry Christmas... Namaste..Terra @]-'-,- (10+ )

Grito

12/24/2009

It is in our nature o be as the bees!!

dancinghawk commented on Flight

12-17-2009

"he soaks up all her blessings" ... beautiful taste of summer in this little story of connection ... ty for posting, dear Grito!

Grito

12/24/2009

Yes, thank you Dancing, your flight is so real too!!!

optimistic commented on Flight

07-18-2009

The sweet essence of love joint from a flower of surrending true love in the making.

Grito

07/18/2009

That is so true Optimistic, I am always glad to read your comments, THank you!!

BridgetBowen commented on Flight

06-09-2009

This is simple yet so elegant. You are so diverse and so wonderful to read. I hope my poems can become light and airy again soon. Wonderful!

Grito

06/10/2009

Gosh dear Bridget, I love your glorious comments, please visit often! By the way, congradulations, are u getting married?

simplypeace commented on Flight

04-09-2009

beautiful.

Grito

12/17/2009

Exhilarating review!!!

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