Season

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  • Grito
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A mi amada esposa (Piedra Aire Viento Agua y Fuego)

Season

If the clouds were to have real reason
sent to earth by angel's breath
in the clasp of nar tomorrows
waiting is my love's true test.
For if she's fair and never wanders
her subtle scent messages are blessed,
and thus I feel it is the season,
set loose and lulled by mother earth
when spring is flown and here meanders,
to word her love is why here I wrest.

O write tis true never to waver
  weave grown abreast in subtle rhythms
empowdered by the sensate psalms
her swollen lips caress I savor,
on thrift turtle doves wings arising
to seize and know thereof so pleasing.

Yea saunter slow and grasp this vintage,
divine the grape of wraith this path detest,
and in this nest of thoughts confess,
for the sounds of  my white sorrows
are set to rest and grieve not rustled page,
where written words accept the sage
that in sun nestled rested blades of grass
is nurtured our love all time will bless.

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tierra7 commented on Season

12-29-2009

OMGoodness...you pack many words of joy in that big golden heart of yours...such much softness and sweetness..i sigh with contentment...youboth are a true Blessin' to one another...and i love it that you share with us the words you both share...Namaste..Terra @}-'-,- (10+ )

Grito

12/30/2009

The synergy of two is much greater than the pair!!!

AIXA commented on Season

07-03-2009

God's git is all creation. Full of blessing full of desires and dreams from new and old poets to write about it.

Grito

07/04/2009

Thank you sweetie!!!

lightcourier commented on Season

06-30-2009

Your work is always great to read. A very nice tribute to your love. Nice to have that! Excellent work. Thanks!

Grito

06/30/2009

Thank you for your gracious review kind Lightcourier!

optimistic commented on Season

06-27-2009

This piece sounds like sweet words of the season coming from the bible psalms Iove reading these verses. Your poem took in the beggining with enjoyment of each month and how it should be appreciated. Yes you said it nicely vintage a season of growth. Great write

Grito

06/27/2009

Thank you very much kind Optimistic!

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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