Shade

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  • Grito
  • GRITO PASSED AWAY ON DECEMBER 17TH, 2010 All the poems I post here are my own and are © ed. Thank you for your visit!.

Shade

I anguish we are as why I am to say
is the red and yellow orange array

of all I see in this fall's ephemeral parade
as blue sky colors breath the leaves display.
 

Svelte worlds strung of you do me dismay
as your veined course's touch chimes the bells
of my heart when nimble in the morning shade
wind frost scatters where soft clover dwells.

The sun rises on our reign of sleepy hollow
fraught in a scent of mint and ease of moss.
Where once my hope of you lay low and fallow
now steps our paths the season has so strewn to cross.

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StandingBear commented on Shade

01-23-2010

There is no beauty as that of a lady! You've matched with words this sentiment! Great write! Thanks for your vote per survivor week 3 per my poem "into them .. into you .. into me" !!! SBear

Grito

01/23/2010

It was my pleasure Bear!! Thank you very much for your excellent review!! By the way, what do you think of an OPC gathering in Todos Santos, in Baja Mexico, like Dah suggested?

tierra7 commented on Shade

12-26-2009

i bow to you Sir Grito....your wondrous creations are all very impressive...very ...very ...FLAWLESS.....another lovely masterpiece drawn with the pure words from your hearts ink well....what an enchantin' flow.....the colors of this all aglow....in the beauty you capture before our hearts eyes...Namaste Terra @}-'-,- (10+ )

Grito

12/27/2009

Beauty is the woman, Tierra, beauty is the woman!!!

AIXA commented on Shade

11-15-2009

Beautiful poem Grito, you show pure nature of wonderfull colored leaves which will take me to your path to the eternity and be my inmortal love.

Grito

11/15/2009

Igualmente querida!!

dahlusion commented on Shade

11-15-2009

A glorious poem filled with such beauty and flow and mastery…

Grito

11/15/2009

Thank you very much for your visit and for your great review Dahlusion!!!

Tempestlady commented on Shade

11-14-2009

So lovely a piece. Such mastery of the human word and natures gifts. You awaken the senses and stir the heart. Write on....

Grito

11/15/2009

Thank you for your most gracious review kind Tempestlady!!!

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

Grito’s Poems (148)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Luz (De los Andes) ® 13
Doris © 5
G.S.S.E.G.B.I
.J.B. (Prose) ©
5
Blue Inca Night (Verse) 38
Collection Schedule 6
Red Shirt 7
Camisa Roja 2
Libre (Free) 6
Sundown Diner 12
Starry Starry Night 10
Letter 11
Whispers 11
Velas 4
Star's 10
Shade 10
Gold 5
Vanity 11
Borne 8
Is 7
Quarks 5
Storm 9
Nihilist 7
Return 7
Light (Verse) 9
Against the Current (Space Prose) 7
Blancas 4
See 5
Time 8
Esa 2
Answer 7
Silver 3
Days 5
Luz 2
Elevator 4
Taste 5
Actias Luna 3
Recital 2
Carousel 8
August 5
Dado 1
Terrace 3
Willow 2
Sueño 1
Blues 3
Shields 2
Choice 2
Encuentro 1
Canvas 2
Dreams 5
One(Senyru) 1
Rays 2
Temporal 1
Air 3
Vivo 1
Folds 3
Ave 2
Season 4
Sihouette 2
Sky 2
Two 1
Valz 1
Malla 1
Vuelven 2
3
Serious 5
Chance 3
Coto Laurel 2
Stars 2
Estrellas 2
Centavos 1
Stones 3
A 1
Laughter 4
Beige 2
Feather(AIXA) 4
Pennies 2
Powder 1
Vigil 1
Away 2
Kite(Wind) 3
Review(Violin
)
2
Sax 3
Bedlam 3
Fruit 2
Is Was (Stone Wind Water and Air) 3
Feather 4
Pluma 1
Wind 3
Vino 1
Ochos 0
Pleiades 5
Rest 3
Free 2
Palmas 1
Miles 2
Gaugauin( Haiku) 2
Shore 2
Asleep(Senyru
)
2
Ice(Senyru) 3
Harvest(Cinqu
ain)
1
Fruit 1
Form 0
Puma 0
Flux 0
Esperandote 1
Anduvimos 1
Aliento 1
American Rose 4
Wing 4
Balance 3
Anguish(Senyr
u)
2
Arc 4
Curso 2
Nado 3
Felt(Haiku) 2
Noche de Aixa 1
Visperas 1
Dias 1
Sailboat 2
Treat(Tanka) 1
Embrace(Senyr
u)
2
Celestial(Cin
quain)
2
I C 4 I M 8
Lapel 6
Coupe 6
Seed 8
World's Play (Words Splay) 5
Risas 4
White 10
She 6
Cream 5
Day 5
Flight 7
Aixa 4
Air, water and stone 7
Bosom 6
Safe 5
Rapture 8
Mirage 7
Canto(Spanish
)
5
Lips 14
Cresent Moon(Prose) 12
Ferns 6
Drops 10
Pass(Verse) 5
Snow Flakes(Prose) 6
Shell 11
Play 12