Snow Flakes(Prose)

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  • Grito
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Snow Flakes(Prose)

A snowstorm they said

would pass through here

that cold night.

Inches of a crystilline cover.

Flakes,

infinitely small.

Frozen.

I see them now.

Messengers of silences.

In repose.

A world of white and blue.

I draw near and read.

The truth in two colors.

I understand.

May God keep us in an embrace.

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ginga commented on Snow Flakes(Prose)

12-29-2009

ahh perfect for a winter;s day. This poem drifts eloquently as does a snowflake. ty for the serenity grito. ginga

Grito

12/29/2009

Peace and blessings Ginga!!!

knight4696 commented on Snow Flakes(Prose)

12-26-2009

Wow Grito ... So much actually being said in this piece. So beautiful and metaphoric. Of course the imagery is outstanding .. but I wouldn't expect anything less from you! :) ... Great Job! ... Ken

Grito

12/26/2009

Thank you Ken, you know how much I appreciate your poetry too, Ivan.

Rhymer commented on Snow Flakes(Prose)

12-25-2009

Creative write high lighting your imagination. Excellent piece.

Grito

12/25/2009

Thank you very much Rhymer!!! I think it is very peaceful.

SavVySam commented on Snow Flakes(Prose)

12-23-2009

Such a quiet and peaceful piece, much like those flakes lying "in repose"... Lovely!

Grito

12/23/2009

Yes, you are right, it is about beautiful peace, thank you very much for your lyrical review kind SaVy!!!

tierra7 commented on Snow Flakes(Prose)

12-23-2009

lovely...sorta like a prism reflectin' beams of light of another sense...to keep the warmth of passion burnin' in the coldness of fragile snowflake ...with a hearts embrace..love is read....i love it !!! Namaste..Terra (10+ )

Grito

12/23/2009

Ahh, you are so nice to me, thank you very much Tierra!!!!

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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Choice 2
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