Star's

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  • Grito
  • GRITO PASSED AWAY ON DECEMBER 17TH, 2010 All the poems I post here are my own and are © ed. Thank you for your visit!.

Star's

Sane tonight more than a second
I felt this fire hot trembling land
sting a spector as your tides ran
into my oft tortured essence,
this succulent stir there you began.

You my splendid acquiescence,
so near that I know to fathom,

we are faceted in the sand,
as host pearls amidst the beige grains come
whence waves have birthed a star's command.

Here is where my longing lingers,
my most passionate of wagers,
and with you I see it settles,
lips slip in our liquid crystal band,
as the breast of your rosy petals
milks sugared cream upon my hand.

Somewhere winds spell plains with leisure,
gladdening swells with their cloistered view,
sow and sing with reasoned measure
as I serenade the pleasure
of voicing this my song to you.

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tierra7 commented on Star's

12-26-2009

Sir Grito, you never fail us....all you pen...comes with soooooo much passion soooo much fire...soooo strong is the desire.....what a beautiful adorin' write.......what a beautiful spell you put us under.....and the beautiful woman whom inspired you to whip out this lovely tune...Namaste...Terra @}-'-,- (10+ )

Grito

12/27/2009

It is not me Tierra, it is Woman, God's perfect creation, thank you for your most excellent and delicious review!!!

ginga commented on Star's

12-06-2009

Grito, A melody of lyrics this treasure is. I love all the imagery, passion and downright lofty ode to this love. Divine! ginga

Grito

12/07/2009

You make me smile with gratitude dear Ginga, thank you very much!!!

dahlusion commented on Star's

12-06-2009

"I serenade the pleasure of voicing this my song to you' — a masterful poetic line! This poem of burning passion is light-up with star light.

Grito

12/07/2009

Thank you very much for your great and most gracious review Dah!!!

AIXA commented on Star's

12-04-2009

From the moment I met you, I knew it was true, Because I couldn’t stop smiling, Nor thinking of you. I couldn’t believe it, Something so wrong I knew, Now that I know your feelings, That you feel the same way too. This feeling’s so wonderful, Like a dream come true, I refuse to stop smiling, Nor thinking of you. Forever yours, AIXA

Grito

12/06/2009

Besos de estrellas a tus dulces labios!!!

Madelynn commented on Star's

11-27-2009

Oh my gosh!WordSlinger told me to get my tush over here and read you, as soon as I got a chance to-really sit and read! Well,he is getting a big thank you for sendingf me over here-and know what?Your gettin' one too!-For writing this...this is so deeply intoxicating in lyric that I had to read this twice-you are amazing! Great write!-Maddi

Grito

11/27/2009

WordSlinger is quite a fellow, thank you very much for your visit and excellent review Madelynn!!!

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

Grito’s Poems (148)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Luz (De los Andes) ® 13
Doris © 5
G.S.S.E.G.B.I
.J.B. (Prose) ©
5
Blue Inca Night (Verse) 38
Collection Schedule 6
Red Shirt 7
Camisa Roja 2
Libre (Free) 6
Sundown Diner 12
Starry Starry Night 10
Letter 11
Whispers 11
Velas 4
Star's 10
Shade 10
Gold 5
Vanity 11
Borne 8
Is 7
Quarks 5
Storm 9
Nihilist 7
Return 7
Light (Verse) 9
Against the Current (Space Prose) 7
Blancas 4
See 5
Time 8
Esa 2
Answer 7
Silver 3
Days 5
Luz 2
Elevator 4
Taste 5
Actias Luna 3
Recital 2
Carousel 8
August 5
Dado 1
Terrace 3
Willow 2
Sueño 1
Blues 3
Shields 2
Choice 2
Encuentro 1
Canvas 2
Dreams 5
One(Senyru) 1
Rays 2
Temporal 1
Air 3
Vivo 1
Folds 3
Ave 2
Season 4
Sihouette 2
Sky 2
Two 1
Valz 1
Malla 1
Vuelven 2
3
Serious 5
Chance 3
Coto Laurel 2
Stars 2
Estrellas 2
Centavos 1
Stones 3
A 1
Laughter 4
Beige 2
Feather(AIXA) 4
Pennies 2
Powder 1
Vigil 1
Away 2
Kite(Wind) 3
Review(Violin
)
2
Sax 3
Bedlam 3
Fruit 2
Is Was (Stone Wind Water and Air) 3
Feather 4
Pluma 1
Wind 3
Vino 1
Ochos 0
Pleiades 5
Rest 3
Free 2
Palmas 1
Miles 2
Gaugauin( Haiku) 2
Shore 2
Asleep(Senyru
)
2
Ice(Senyru) 3
Harvest(Cinqu
ain)
1
Fruit 1
Form 0
Puma 0
Flux 0
Esperandote 1
Anduvimos 1
Aliento 1
American Rose 4
Wing 4
Balance 3
Anguish(Senyr
u)
2
Arc 4
Curso 2
Nado 3
Felt(Haiku) 2
Noche de Aixa 1
Visperas 1
Dias 1
Sailboat 2
Treat(Tanka) 1
Embrace(Senyr
u)
2
Celestial(Cin
quain)
2
I C 4 I M 8
Lapel 6
Coupe 6
Seed 8
World's Play (Words Splay) 5
Risas 4
White 10
She 6
Cream 5
Day 5
Flight 7
Aixa 4
Air, water and stone 7
Bosom 6
Safe 5
Rapture 8
Mirage 7
Canto(Spanish
)
5
Lips 14
Cresent Moon(Prose) 12
Ferns 6
Drops 10
Pass(Verse) 5
Snow Flakes(Prose) 6
Shell 11
Play 12