Cresent Moon(Prose)

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  • Grito
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Cresent Moon(Prose)

Crescent moon(Prose)

A clear and frigid night,
last nights snowstorm quiet and on the ground.
The sky a deep blue black.
Breath of condensed air trails,
the new crescent moon with Venus to the east
stops all thoughts as they struggle to relapse.


She waits for my reaction.
Somehow her light makes it right.
Always to be by your side.
The soft tread of boot to snowfall.
It doesn't matter when there is a test.
I sense my insignificance.

Peace and joy again.



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knight4696 commented on Cresent Moon(Prose)

12-26-2009

Here ya go again Grito! :) Painting pictures with your words! Damn ... you're one hell of an artist! : ) The Moon does seem to have an alluring appeal doesn't it? Great Write my friend! ... Ken

Grito

12/26/2009

Yes, the Moon is very special Ken, thank you very much for your most excellent review!!! Ivan

tierra7 commented on Cresent Moon(Prose)

12-23-2009

Sir Grito., ....such a divine treat to take a journey as you guide us to feel the presence of peace and joy...i love the feel of it..the floatin' sensation as i pondered to your every word...totally mesmerizin' thank you...Namaste..Terra @}-'-,- (10+ )

Grito

12/23/2009

These are just special moments for for me Tierra, and I am very glad to be able to share them, thank you very much!!!

dancinghawk commented on Cresent Moon(Prose)

12-17-2009

beautiful write, Grito! "the new crescent moon with Venus to the east / stops all thoughts as they struggle to relapse." a moment of absolute stillness in an otherwise hectic world (only just hinted at with "It doesn't matter when there is a test./I sense my insignificance." and the final line ... indeed ... this is the place from which peace and joy arise ... -dh

Grito

12/17/2009

They are a beautiful and engaging pair when they are together!!!

dahlusion commented on Cresent Moon(Prose)

12-17-2009

The pure song contained in this write is forever lyrical, ascending astral planes and mystical zones; romance is transparently musical.

Grito

12/17/2009

The moon seemed to be talking to me like she knew me that night!!

jademelissa74 commented on Cresent Moon(Prose)

12-17-2009

I have always been told that the first step in the acquisition of wisdom is silence and the second is listening....your words bring a moment of meditation to the reader in which the essence of the poem is captured to the fullest. You are warm at heart. Thank you for sharing Ivan!

Grito

12/17/2009

There is something very special when these two join together on your right shoulder!!

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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