Despair..

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  • TheAngelOfDeath
  • Posted a new poem first time is a few years check it out its a draft as of right now ill fix the spelling and stuff when I have time

Despair..

In the quiet of a crowded place
i jump to the sight of your embrace
only to find that you dont care
im over here and your over there
alone in my mind i cannot bare
just the thought of living with no-one..
Despair..
Perseption cripples the legs of the most savage beast
I look in the mirror and see no-one but me
No-body's there..
to back my up when i fall..
Alone with myself..
together we'll Crawl..
Through the valleys of Hell..
Knock.........Knock......

But no-bodys home..



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andais commented on Despair..

09-21-2009

I look in the mirror and see no one but me.......I feel the lonelyness in these words. What doesn't destroy you will make you stronger some people say. I say kill them with kindnesss and compassion.....and when you reach the end of your rope you say screw them all. Some people choose to be alone only because it is better being yourself than what others want you to be, or lable you, as they don't care to know the real you. You can walk beside me if you like, I'm alone most all the time when it comes to the battles of life. Take my hand! Great write, it's a great expression of how hard it is to walk through this world. I often say that hell can't be that bad, I feel like I've been living it here on earth, so I have practice!!! LOL! The only real thing you can do is to survive......that really pisses people off.

Tadanori commented on Despair..

05-08-2009

Excellent.

sovinto commented on Despair..

03-11-2009

oh yoo close to how i feel the greater part of the time. very well done, i love it

Robin commented on Despair..

03-07-2009

Not judging, but I like this one...

bandit1192 commented on Despair..

03-04-2009

You're getting noticed because you are good. Keep up the good work. TS

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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