"Spring,Summer,Fall,Win
ter"

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    • TheAngelOfDeath
    • Posted a new poem first time is a few years check it out its a draft as of right now ill fix the spelling and stuff when I have time

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    This poem is a vivid imagery of how I feel a world of love and peace should flow together.

    P.s I love feed back let me know what you think

    Thanks your friend and fellow poet
    Grim

    "Spring,Summer,Fall,Winter"

    "Spring,Summer,Fall,Winter"

    Life is standing still like sand wedged between a rock in a hourglass
    ....The time has come again for the seasons to change....
     
    While the majestic god runs down the lakeside
    His white fur glistens with the sparkle of the moon light on the water.

    As his speed merges with that of the wind
    He floats along his empire like a gentle breeze.

    The black night sky only complementing his beauty
    With kisses of starlight to his eyes and face.

    When his paws touch the earth's soil flowers jump forth and bloom
    In the hopes of being near the feet of a prince.

    While weaving in and out through the old saplings of spring
    The leaves leap from the trees in for a chance to fly with the gods
    If only for a few seconds.
    Only to be left desolate on the ground as a colorful trail of respect.

    Finally as the god's run comes to an end
    The cries of a forest cold from despair call to him
    ....and the cycle starts again.... 


    a poem by: TheAngelOfDeath

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    dumplin commented on "Spring,Summer,Fall,Winter"

    10-13-2009

    hm, only a couple of misspellings and an extra word thrown in there, but this was beautiful. A very nice expression of how nature is born.

    TheAngelOfDeath

    10/13/2009

    I reposted this poem please read and rate the new one if you would i am hoping it might win the contest.. Your friend grim

    MrGee commented on "Spring,Summer,Fall,Winter"

    10-13-2009

    Very well written. The meter is good and good use of the metaphor. Keep up the good work. i rate this poem a 10.

    TheAngelOfDeath

    10/13/2009

    I reposted this poem please read and rate the new one if you would i am hoping it might win the contest.. Your friend grim

    melanie23 commented on "Spring,Summer,Fall,Winter"

    08-26-2009

    u have a woderful imagination. this was lovely. well done.

    TheAngelOfDeath

    10/13/2009

    I reposted this poem please read and rate the new one if you would i am hoping it might win the contest.. Your friend grim

    papapaczki commented on "Spring,Summer,Fall,Winter"

    07-01-2009

    Cool picture. I particularly liked the part of the leaves leaping. A chance to fly. "trees in for" -- was in not supposed to be there? Just something that didn't read right for some reason. Otherwise, it moves well, and reads well. Nice job!

    TheAngelOfDeath

    10/13/2009

    I reposted this poem please read and rate the new one if you would i am hoping it might win the contest.. Your friend grim

    brenttany commented on "Spring,Summer,Fall,Winter"

    06-30-2009

    this is a magnificent piece of imagery, connectedness, and spirituality...what a gift you have...if i was half the poet you are...id be a millionaire

    TheAngelOfDeath

    06/30/2009

    Thnx you this is my favorite poem...I put my heart and soul in everypiece of my poetry. Im glad you enjoyed. IF you like this peice Read "Scarlet Moon" "The Suffering" "Black Label" and "Ghostless Shell" oh "My Life" Thnx your freind and fellow poet Grim

    TheAngelOfDeath

    10/13/2009

    I reposted this poem please read and rate the new one if you would i am hoping it might win the contest.. Your friend grim

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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