"Raging Sanity Part 3"

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  • TheAngelOfDeath
  • Posted a new poem first time is a few years check it out its a draft as of right now ill fix the spelling and stuff when I have time

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This poem has a very deep meaning and before you critisize this poem would you please ask me what this poem is about and i will tell you the meaning of this poem and what happend

Your Friend and fellow poet
Grim

"Raging Sanity Part 3"

Raging Sanity Part 3

"Her Memory's"

My body feels the need to cave in as I sit here alone
Yet I'm in a crowded place
The pictures that surround me
I call home
No one sees the pain I feel
Because I keep it to myself
All I want Is to see your face
I long to remember the times we had
But I can't
Because I Drank them away
I don't care about my self anymore
So I don't even pray
God can't bring you back
So why should I stay
I want to Die
I can't be myself anymore
So I cry all alone as I lay on the floor
Sad and on my own 
Only my Dreams bring you back
Then in a flash your gone
and I'm reminded of that
My sanity's about to crack
Blind as a bat
To the world and this place that I live
I need to break down and just give
My soul..My body..My life
To someone else..
Time is of the essence
So I keep this love to myself
I need help
Cause I can't stop what I'm doing
I keep pulling myself away
Because humanity's Ruined
I have to push through the day
I see these girls that are 14
Doing drugs and having sex
It makes me sick
Because I can't change what the world's become
Ready or not
Death here I come
I've loaded the gun
I'm about to pull the trigger
Isnt this fun
I put the images in my head on paper
The blood will soon run
All over the floor
All over the table in my house
All over the keyboard, the computer screen and my mouse
I'm typing my last words
As they come from my mouth
What's this about?
My minds in a rage
My words mean nothing
as I type page by page
How can I Say
Or describe how I feel
Talking to myself
The Voice says to take the pills
They make you happy
They make you sad
They make you forget about Your mom and your dad!
I'm about to get mad!
Stop talking!
I want to wright this myself
I would ask you if I wanted your help!
OK
Where was I at
I was just talking to my pain
Because of how much it hurts
I want to cut a hole in my wrist
and watch the pain squirt
All over the bed and couch
where we use to lay
All over the kid's room
Where they would have played
Oh what a day
I'm reliving my past
She would tell me don't do it
And that she loves me
Put the gun down and relax
That I should just cherish her memory
And forever
love her back

A poem By:TheAngelOfDeath
 















 

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papapaczki commented on "Raging Sanity Part 3"

08-25-2009

Wow, that was very deep. I really am speechless after reading it.

beautifuldeath commented on "Raging Sanity Part 3"

08-08-2009

I was trying to think of something smashing to say but I can't seem to see through the tears streaming from my eyes. This was very deep. "Ready or not Death, Here I come" Love that!!!!!!!!! This one here is definately one of my favorites. I will be back to read this again and again. Loved it, well done!!!!!!! 10 from me

TheAngelOfDeath

08/25/2009

I am so glad you like this poem i put my heart and soul in this poem. You know what this poem is really about is why the tears as you say were streaming down your face. It is in Her Memory... I am going to re post this one later with more... and correct the grammical errors if there are any. I wrote this during my vacation at the one time i had a computer lol :)

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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