..The Valley Of The Shadow Of Death..

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    • TheAngelOfDeath
    • Posted a new poem first time is a few years check it out its a draft as of right now ill fix the spelling and stuff when I have time

    ..The Valley Of The Shadow Of Death..

    ..I'm trapt in the valley of the shadow of Death..
    ..Piercing shrieks and screams vibrate through my chest..
    ..As i lay here in waste The cold breeze that is Death..
    ..Slowly creeps down the back of my neck..
    ..Chill bumps grow and all my hairs rise..
    ..My fear boils up as i look in his eyes..
    ..Overwhelming is the pain.. Like being tourtured with knives..
    ..Praying to god that he would just let me die!..
    ..To my amazement he answers "Stop living a lie"..
    ..Death answers to.. "This boy is mine!"..
    ..I then scream in pain."I feel dead inside!"..
    .."Why don't you kill me!"..
    .."I just want to die!"..
    ..god whispers my name and Death takes my life..
    ..No mercy..No love..No hate..
    ..No rights..

    (TheAngelOfDeath)
    4/6/09

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    FiloRozzell commented on ..The Valley Of The Shadow Of Death..

    04-08-2009

    Damn! I died with you just then.....

    lonewolf commented on ..The Valley Of The Shadow Of Death..

    04-07-2009

    I'm with you. I can relate. good job.

    beautifuldeath commented on ..The Valley Of The Shadow Of Death..

    04-06-2009

    another astounding write. Great job on this one.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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