"The Mirror of Fate"

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  • TheAngelOfDeath
  • Posted a new poem first time is a few years check it out its a draft as of right now ill fix the spelling and stuff when I have time

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This poem is about how people never realize that they are there own worst ememy.. Until it is to late.

"The Mirror of Fate"

"The Mirror of Fate"

..As the Darkness approches..
..You see your life as but a twinkle in the demons eye..
..But as he goes to choke the last breath from your body..
..A bright light suddenly shines upon your face..
..Nearly blinded..
..As you start to get your vision back..
..You realize..
..Your standing in front of a mirror..
..Choking your self..


A poem by: TheAngelOfDeath

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Scorpia commented on "The Mirror of Fate"

05-18-2011

wow, this is just crazy, but so true. confront yourself, stop hiding...i sound like a hypocrite. lol, but this is an awesome poem

Jaimie commented on "The Mirror of Fate"

07-06-2009

I like it. its true and makes sense we are our own enemies.

GucciGurl commented on "The Mirror of Fate"

07-04-2009

I really like this. I have done this a many times in my life. Making baby choices until I cant stand to even look in the mirror. But then something or someone comes along and makes you feel whole again. Then at that time you can look in the mirror and smile. Then see the beauty that really is in the mirror. Nice job!

Artie commented on "The Mirror of Fate"

07-04-2009

Nice twist there!! I like the mood that you very quickly establish... ..You see your life as but a twinkle in the demons eye.. ... Sets the tone very well. 10 from me.

FiloRozzell commented on "The Mirror of Fate"

07-02-2009

That is a very truthful look in the mirror, not always a pretty sight but you can't run from it. You have to kick that guys ass until there is a reflection that you can live with. Once again blow that sh** out...

TheAngelOfDeath

07/02/2009

This is one of my favorite comments you ever left love the (Yu have to kick that guys ass until there is a reflection that you can live with)

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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