..Daze of War..


  • Lost Love
    • TheAngelOfDeath
    • Posted a new poem first time is a few years check it out its a draft as of right now ill fix the spelling and stuff when I have time

    ..Daze of War..

    ..Will you remember me?..
    ..The question you asked me before you died..
    ..You cut your life short with that cursied knife..
    ..That is also what you did to me with blood struck sighs..
    ..How could you do this to me?
    ..How could you die?..

    ..I hate myself now but i hate you more..
    ..You left me alone..For in the clouds you soar..
    ..I freeze from the loneliness..I can't let you go..
    ..Everything happens for reasons..I don't know..
    ..How can i live in a world so cold..
    ..As i stare into heaven..The blizard blows..
    ..I wish i could see your face once more..
    ..I would kiss you lay down and then cry on the floor..
    ..Then i would stand tall..
    ..Through the Daze of War..
    ..Broken..Beatin..Shattered..and sore..
    ..Blessid be the life that i live no more..


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    Sydney commented on ..Daze of War..


    im sorry for your loss. i feel your pain. this is great on how you manage to capture this true story into a poem.

    anneliseh commented on ..Daze of War..


    i love the last line of this poem. and the style is amazing. can't wait for the rest of them.

    kareemrocks3 commented on ..Daze of War..


    a lovely poem written by one of the best keep up the good work a feel the pain u endured

    twilightchick commented on ..Daze of War..


    this poem is so beautful. its full of pain and suffereage and as i was reading it i could start to feel the pain oyu felt, and still are going through, and i'm so srry for your loss.

    JALCasey commented on ..Daze of War..


    The only thing i can say really is wow.... it's so inciteful, like here's my feelings, take them and leave them... and it's sad because the reader is going through this pain with you as they read this poem.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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