Judgement

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    • TheAngelOfDeath
    • Posted a new poem first time is a few years check it out its a draft as of right now ill fix the spelling and stuff when I have time

    Judgement

    Religion, Distruction
    a world so corrupt
    Deception,Revoltion
    In this hole were stuck

    They say if were good
    we will make it to heaven

    They say if were bad
    we decend strait to hell

    They fill up our heads with lies and illusions
    Tales of a god and a devil as well

    They fight with each other
    when they say
    "turn the other cheek"
    They tell you "dont judge"
    Yet you judge me
    Hypocrites that say that their godly is all i see
    They smoke drink and cuss
    all things of the world
    They have sex lie and lust
    To me thats obserd for them to judge me
    But if you must judge
    first look in the mirror
    and judge what you see


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    freind commented on Judgement

    07-16-2009

    i have been reading your stuff pretty dam good . but i wonder if your are stuck between . the powers of eveil and good. your work is strong words. but very good

    raziel69 commented on Judgement

    07-11-2009

    spot on, my friend, very good work. you hit the nail right on the head with this one.

    kareemrocks3 commented on Judgement

    05-04-2009

    true people should judge themselves b4 speaking about others

    mdaffron commented on Judgement

    04-28-2009

    Completely true and people are idiots if they dont believe it

    frankson03 commented on Judgement

    04-13-2009

    true stuff.. there is a point in life, where we all feel like is what They say really real, ive come to find out, it aint about everybody else. cuz there judgments, will only have them to be judged.

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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