Waiting to Die

1 Comments

Tags:
  • Emotional
    • TheAngelOfDeath
    • Posted a new poem first time is a few years check it out its a draft as of right now ill fix the spelling and stuff when I have time

    Waiting to Die

    ..Kill me gently..
    ..Kill me with love..
    ..Or kill me with hatred..
    ..Struck down from above..
    ..I feel like a puppet strung out on a line..
    ..Being forced to use scissors to cut down his life..
    ..I smile cause im forced to..
    ..I smile with glee..
    ..Im happy on the outside..
    ..Or at least what you see..
    ..Im a moster on the inside..
    ..Just trying to escape..
    ..Your a monster on the outside..
    ..I give what you take..
    ..My body's a jail cell for loathing and hate..
    ..Im a Criminal mastermind forced to stay straight..

    ..Every part of my body is controled by anouther..
    ..This person i hate..
    ..Is none but my mother..
    ..She tells me do this..
    ..She makes me do that..
    I wish she'd just die!!!
    "I want to tell her that.."
    But i can't!.. I just sit here and rant!
    Everything thats within me says shes holding me back!
    I can't be myself if she controls where im at!
    I hate church!
    I hate family time even more!
    Fuck that!
    ..I'll just sit in this Dark place that i call my mind..
    ..Shatterd and Hopeless..
    ..Waiting to Die..

    Poem Comments

    (1)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    beautifuldeath commented on Waiting to Die

    03-13-2009

    your words echo thoughout my mind and within them I find comfort. Loved it!

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

    TheAngelOfDeath’s Poems (86)

    Title Comments
    Title Comments
    "Hollow Whispers" 0
    "Murderous intent" 1
    Tainted soul 2
    "Broken but not dead" 1
    "Spring,Summe
    r,Fall,Winter
    " (Repost)
    11
    "One fine day in the middle of the night" 8
    "Restless" Dedcated to her memory 7
    "Drawing a Blank" 10
    Raging Sanity Prt 4 2
    "Raging Sanity Part 3" 3
    "Raging Sanity Part 1 and 2" 9
    "The Maniac Part 8" 6
    "The Maniac Part 7" 4
    "The Maniac Part 6" 5
    "The Maniac Part 5" 5
    "The Maniac Part 4" 6
    "The Maniac Part 3" 8
    The Maniac part 2 13
    "The Maniac Part 1" 14
    "The Mirror of Fate" 6
    "The Beams of the Sun" 7
    "Beautiful Death" 5
    "Faith for the Faithless" 1
    "Metamorphosi
    s"
    2
    "The Black Flowers Of Death" 3
    "The Thief" 6
    "The Weary Traveler" 6
    "Spring,Summe
    r,Fall,Winter
    "
    16
    "Scarlet Moon" 17
    "The Replacement" Revised 6
    My Hell 1
    Soiled 6
    The Teacher 5
    The Earth's Rebirth Part 2 4
    Dance of Death 1
    (..From the beginning to the end..) 4
    ..The Face Of Death.. -7
    "Angel of War" 4
    (..The Earths Rebirth..Part 1) 2
    ..Gossamer Heart.. 4
    ..Who am I?.. 7
    ..I once had love.. 18
    ..The Devil's Black Thrown..(I remember) 5
    ..Thinking of you.. 3
    ..Forever.. 8
    Feet First 10
    ..Daze of War.. 33
    ..The Valley Of The Shadow Of Death.. 4
    Love..Hate..H
    armony
    8
    ..Alone with myself.. 2
    Inflicting Dreams 3
    Mocking Words 2
    Death's Decay 3
    The Economy 2
    The Road Of Time 3
    La Santa Muerte 10
    The Calling 1
    Waiting to Die 1
    The Perfect Death 4
    Poetry Speaks 3
    Death's Embrace 9
    My Life 9
    Ghostless Shell 11
    List Of The Unholy 14
    Despair.. 12
    Betrayed 11
    The Unborn 5
    Pulsing thoughts 6
    Decaying Alive 8
    Dead Seeds 4
    The Suffering 22
    Black Label 16
    Storm Of The Calm 4
    Never Enough part 2 2
    Judgement 6
    Third Ey\e Blind 1
    Face of the truth 3
    a wasted life 11
    Moving on... 3
    Unbreakable 3
    Forever 5
    Fate 4
    Red Rose 11
    Dark,Light 1
    Eternal 7
    Deaths Angel 12