"The Maniac Part 8"

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    This poem is my favorite of all of them it show that anyone can live a dream..But for some when they wake up.. Is the nightmare.

    "The Maniac Part 8"

    The Maniac Part 8

    "Dead Reality"

    Flashing lights paint the ceiling as John begins to come too
    He feels the strength leaving his body
    as the warm caress of blood bath's his face
    His hearing fades in and out as he tries to realize where he is

    In his dis-orated state the flashing of the fluorescent lights
    as he is wheeled down the hallway
    seems to slow down time

    "What happened?"
    He asks in a weak voice

    His vision is blurred by the red rivers of blood that he loved so much

    "Where am I?"
    "Why am I here?"
    He asks the blurry white figure standing above him

    "It's OK!"
    "It's OK!"
    "Your in the hospital! You've been shot!"
    "Do you remember who did this to you?"
    She asks John frantically

    At that moment a flash flood of memories rage through his mind
    Right up to the point where he pulled the trigger

    "No! No!"
    "It was all a dream!"
    He yelled
    "It couldn't have been a dream! Where is Share!"
    "Nurse where is Share!"
    He screams grasping onto her shirt nearly drowning in tears!

    "Who's Share?"
    The nurse replies
    "Is she the one that did this to you?"

    "....No...."
    He said in a weak depressed voice

    Then as he tries to laugh
    he coughs up a small amount of blood
    He realised it was all a dream

    ....He was living....
    ....A Dead Reality....

    ....To Be Continued....

    A poem by: TheAngelOfDeath

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    melanie23 commented on "The Maniac Part 8"

    08-26-2009

    holy crap. this series is amazing. real, gut wrentching, painful. i love it. they were filled with horror and suspense. u have a way of keeping the reader on the edge of their seats. well done.

    beautifuldeath commented on "The Maniac Part 8"

    08-08-2009

    well you sure can hook a reader. I loved this!!!!!!!!!!! can't wait for the next installment. I am forever hooked. 10 from me

    papapaczki commented on "The Maniac Part 8"

    08-07-2009

    Interesting, and another cliff hanger... John has turned out to be a great maniac!

    FiloRozzell commented on "The Maniac Part 8"

    08-02-2009

    Another great addition, is this the last one? What' s next?

    TheAngelOfDeath

    08/06/2009

    I am working on part 9 right now. It is called (Doctors orders)

    WordSlinger commented on "The Maniac Part 8"

    07-31-2009

    I have read all of them, admirable, truly poetic horror. SLAYER!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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