"The Maniac Part 7"

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    • TheAngelOfDeath
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    This poem is a dark love story that feeds the imagination of to what a person can become...

     

    I love feed back so let be know what you think if you would be so kind

    Your friend and fellow poet

    Grim

    "The Maniac Part 7"

    The Maniac Part 7

    "A Dark New Day"

    "What a beautiful night this is.... Right Share?"
    John says as they watch the scarlet moon falling from the sky

    "Y-y-y-yes.... Very beautiful"
    share replies in a weak stutter

    "I thought you had grown out of that stuttering problem of yours?"
    He says while look into her eyes with concern

    "N-n-no.... N-n-not yet"
    She replies

    "It's OK.... After I killed my mother I stuttered for a while too
    ....You will get over it soon enough....
    Did you know it has been nearly a month sense you joined me?
    ....Almost 4 whole weeks...."
    He then laughs silently as he grabs hold of her hand

    "....W-w-w-wow.... Really?...."
    She yells
    "....It hasn't felt that long...."
    "....S-s-s-so...."
    "Who are we going to kill today?"
    She asks with excitement

    "AHH! Right to the point! That's daddy's girl!"
    He quickly replies

    At that moment memories of her Father's murder run through her mind!
    She remembers how she was forced to torture her father to death!
    ....At the threat of her own life!....
    ....by the man standing directly beside her....
    ....Then she remembered how it felt....
    ....breaking the few bonds that held down her sanity....
    ....And she laughed....
    ....right before she whisperd in John's ear....
    "....I love you...."


    As they stand together watching the sun's light break the black sky
    ....They bow to respect the coming....
    ....Of a Dark New Day....


    A poem by: TheAngelOfDeath

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    melanie23 commented on "The Maniac Part 7"

    08-26-2009

    well done. love can make one do almost ne thing. history shows us that

    beautifuldeath commented on "The Maniac Part 7"

    07-29-2009

    ah yes, the things we end up doing in the name of love or what love can force us to do. thrilling write. loved it again. 10 from me

    FiloRozzell commented on "The Maniac Part 7"

    07-29-2009

    This is the makings of a very nice novel, you should really consider it..My friend this is a very good story that could develop into a awsome movie..I have enjoyed it thus far...Keep it commin

    papapaczki commented on "The Maniac Part 7"

    07-28-2009

    So now he's breeding fellow maniacs.. interesting.. I think this is the best part since 4.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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