"Scarlet Moon"

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    • TheAngelOfDeath
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    Poem Commentary

    This poem describes how people want a reason to show who they really are...BUT at the first opportunity to avoid it ..They will..
    Just as the flowers had a reason to bloom and even felt the blessing of Death as the form of the wind (in the 3rd and 4th lines). The flowers hid their true form  because they did not want to be seen by the world.
    ( Or how I see it...as a fear of being judged)

    Thanks for your time
    I hope you enjoyed it as much as i enjoyed writing it.
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    Your friend an fellow poet
    Grim aka (TheAngelOfDeath)

    "Scarlet Moon"

    "Scarlet Moon"

    ..The black flowers of Death blossom under the scarlet moon..
    ..As the moon's red beam shines down upon the flowers..
    ..Their petals move as if blown by the wind..
    ..But there is none..
    ..Slowly as they begin to show their true form..
    ..The sun rises..
    ..And they wither away..


    A poem By: TheAngelOfDeath

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    LiciaGail commented on "Scarlet Moon"

    08-27-2009

    Your right! I did like it! Your writing is amazing! I can write pages and feel like i havent said enough to explain how I feel but you... you just write a few lines and it blows me away!

    melanie23 commented on "Scarlet Moon"

    08-26-2009

    this is spectacular/ i love it. short but not sweet. great job.

    FiloRozzell commented on "Scarlet Moon"

    06-28-2009

    Beautiful way of describing fake friends, people who dont know who they are and the ones that wish they were someone else.The people that are not true to the one that should matter most themselves.But just as time will bring poo will float and the hidden comes into view and it's not pretty.

    Romano commented on "Scarlet Moon"

    06-26-2009

    they say that a picture is worth a thousand words, yet with your short brief words it speaks to millions

    soulwriter commented on "Scarlet Moon"

    06-26-2009

    The moon the flowers - the sun the fallen petals... It took few strokes of the pen to create the grand mystic slendor.. I did enjoy

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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