Fate

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    • TheAngelOfDeath
    • Posted a new poem first time is a few years check it out its a draft as of right now ill fix the spelling and stuff when I have time

    Fate

    Eternety....What we all live toward...
    Fate.....What we all live for...
    Time....What consumes us all...
    for one day we shall stand the next we shall fall....
    Death... Cannever be stopped..
    Life in itself is a huge death clock...
    Ticking away at the time in your flesh...
    Till the time your released...the time of your death...
    Love....Is hard to discribe....a mutual feeling of body and mind...
    A feeling that cripples the people that lose it...
    People grow hard when others abuse it...
    This is a feeling that can kill you inside....
    This feeling runs rampant in young confused minds...
    The people that want it always try to use it...
    But young and confused some walk strait through it...
    Some stiffin the hearts of anouthers true love....
    Causing pain, hate, anguish, struggle, and lust...
    All this together turns a pure heart to dust....
    So watch what you do when you think your in love.

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    Mangus commented on Fate

    06-16-2009

    Interesting way you interwoven two very distinct, but connected facts of life. Accurately displaying the emotional rollercoaster we live through. Well written, thank you for sharing

    bandit1192 commented on Fate

    03-02-2009

    Good poem, felt like two completely different poems, though. 1st one ended with... the time of your death.The 2nd was about love. TS

    beautifuldeath commented on Fate

    02-28-2009

    even the old can "walk straight through it" I am speechless. must add to favorites. Excellent

    thomasX90 commented on Fate

    02-05-2009

    Holy shit man. I really like this one! Kinda makes me think of the time I turned my back on you when I was with demon bitch.. Very well written man.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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