Ghostless Shell

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    • TheAngelOfDeath
    • Posted a new poem first time is a few years check it out its a draft as of right now ill fix the spelling and stuff when I have time

    Ghostless Shell

    The fabric of time and space melts away...
    as i sit in my mind..this fragile place..
    The Sightest touch or push...
    Sends me over the edge...
    I fall and break..
    But am i dead..

    No..
    I get up and walk again..

    But i just fall back apart..
    with the arm i have left I hold the peices close to heart..
    As i walk down this lonley road i drop the peices one by one..
    As desperately as i try...I cant seem to hold them on..

    My fragile limbs, like glass, break off..As the tougher life's road gets
    I'm no more than a Ghostless Shell...
    I keep walking..
    But i dont exist..

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    cliftondurant commented on Ghostless Shell

    09-15-2009

    this is nice some time life make us feel this way but we keep on toiling on great job

    Zephyr commented on Ghostless Shell

    09-02-2009

    The poems that toy with your perception of reality are far superior to any other poem. This is one of the few that toy with someone's sense of existance. Well done, sir.

    Crush commented on Ghostless Shell

    07-30-2009

    simply amazing..i am jealous, yes, but better than that, i am appreciative of the gifts u share.

    sk8ergirl commented on Ghostless Shell

    06-25-2009

    wow that was kinda creepy you should write more of this

    frog commented on Ghostless Shell

    06-17-2009

    The imagery in this poem was so emphatic to me. I would love to see this poem brought to life with art.

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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