Blood Rain

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Wanna go to a Hot Club?! Great Goth Music!! Great Goth Crowd!! Come Join Us In The Fun!! Sorry, There's always a line, So we can only let you in - one soul at a time! ... xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx To get you in the mood ... Open another page and listen to the goth music while reading. Go to http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UbnLRraWvHk

Blood Rain

There's a little goth club
on the south side of town.
A place where everybody goes
when the Sun goes down.
Featuring live entertainment
with some local stars.
Jammin' demon goth rock
on their electric guitars!

I was standin' in the doorway
scopin' the scene out.
Just trying to understand
what this place is about.
Started walkin' cross the floor
just when, to my surprise.
Felt like I was being hunted
wasn't really sure why?

The guitar was screeching to the beat of the drums.
As the singer was screaming from the top of his lungs!
~ ~ ~
Blood Rain! - Blood Rain!
  Let it shower - - Taste the pain!
Blood Rain! - Blood Rain!
Feel his power - - Praise his name!
Blood Rain!
~ ~ ~

There were eyes to the back of me
and eyes to the front.
So hypnotically inviting
I couldn't move or run.
They started to form a circle
in a hedonistic dance.
Anointing me in their pleasure
as they begin to chant!

~ ~ ~
Blood Rain! - Blood Rain!
  Let it shower - - Taste the pain!
Blood Rain! - Blood Rain!
Feel his power - - Praise his name!
Blood Rain!
~ ~ ~

My head started spinnin' so fast
that I fell to the ground.
They all sadistically laughed
with such an evil sound.
They picked me up and put me
on a cold marble slab.
Bound, gagged and shackled
my limbs hurting so bad!

Lord Lucifer they summon
as they call out his name.
"We've brought you another soul
an offering is made."
And the Dark Priest comes forth 
with his dagger in hand.
Cuts my heart out of my chest
and they begin to chant!

~ ~ ~ 
Blood Rain! - Blood Rain!
  Let it shower - - Taste the pain!
Blood Rain! - Blood Rain!
Feel his power - - Praise his name!
Blood Rain!
~ ~ ~


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bluskyinthenite commented on Blood Rain

04-02-2010

You have quit the imagination. Loved this one aswell as all your other writes. thanks... Blood rain..........

knight4696

04/02/2010

Thanks so much Blue! :) I love that you enjoy my darkside. My imagination sometimes takes me on some pretty twisted journeys! lol! Keeps me on my toes .. and never boring! lol! :) Thanks again my friend! :) Ken

KLS commented on Blood Rain

03-14-2010

That's what I'm talking about! I don't know where you came up with a piece like that but I like it!!!

knight4696

03/15/2010

Thanks KLS! I appreciate it ... The Muse is funny that way .. I have no idea where it came from either! lol! :) Glad you enjoyed! :) Ken

LGDisturb commented on Blood Rain

03-04-2010

artie is right, the music was a great touch. an awesome flow and a great rhyme scheme. loved it. AWESOME job!

knight4696

03/04/2010

Thanks LG. I'm happy you enjoyed it! :) I think the music fits it to a tee. Thanks for your awesome comments! : ) Ken

Artie commented on Blood Rain

02-20-2010

The music goes great with this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

knight4696

02/20/2010

Thanks Artie! :) I guess all those expanation marks mean you like it! lol :) Thanks again, Ken

EmotionalWolf commented on Blood Rain

02-19-2010

awesome music and very interesting poem :) loving it!

knight4696

02/19/2010

Thanks EmotionalWolf! :) Glad ya like it. These are actually song lyrics, thus the repeating chant "chorus" I think the music fits this one to a tee! Thanks for your comments and read, Much appreciated. :) Ken

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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