Winter Witch

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One Very Cold-Hearted Bitch .....

Winter Witch

I tell you woman - -
You're so damn cold.
To feel your touch,
Chills me to the bone!
Your piercing eyes - -
They freeze me like ice.
Your chilling fingers,
Squeeze me like a vise!

The constant torture - -
Never ending pain.
You gouge like a knife,
Put me to shame!
Your sub-zero breath - -
is like the biting wind.
Constantly stabbing me,
over and over again!
~~~
Your just a - -
Winter Witch!
Just another one of
Satan's brides!!
Your just a - -
Winter Witch!
And I'm just another
Sacrafice! - Tonight!
Your such a cold-hearted Bitch!
Winter Witch!!
~~~
You abuse my body - -
A frozen demise.
Chisel my soul,
Pick away at the ice!!
Your frigid attack - -
Shivers me in pain.
Can't fight no more,
Feel my life drain!!

 Now add another - -
Mark in your life.
You've killed the brother,
Of Satan's wife!!
We grew up together - -
So throw me in a ditch,
You'll never know love,
Cause your the Winter Witch!!
~~~
Your just a - -
Winter Witch!
Just another one of
Satan's brides!!
Your just a - -
Winter Witch!
And I'm just another
Sacrafice! - Tonight!
Your such a cold-hearted Bitch!
Winter Witch!!

~~~
                                     
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Teardrops commented on Winter Witch

07-03-2010

My heart is sad i missed this poem of yours now what kind of fan am I . You rock my firend and I would read your work even if it bore a FDA warning lol Knight you have talent not yet tapped Marie

knight4696

07/04/2010

Thank you so much Marie! :) FDA Warning ... lol! :) hmmm what could that acronym stand for? Fear, Darkness and Abyss! :) Thanks again my friend for the read and wonderful comments as usual! :) Ken

am2anangel commented on Winter Witch

02-04-2010

Once again excellent picture for this poem. I especially liked the line chisel my soul. very descriptive work. well done.

knight4696

02/06/2010

Thanks Again Angel! :) I appreciate it as usual .. Thanks for the Kudo's on the pic and the line choice! :) Ken

Tempy commented on Winter Witch

12-27-2009

amazing piece of work. i been reading your latest works and i'm insanly impressed you have improved so much your poems are truly perfect and amazing well done sweet one

knight4696

12/27/2009

Thanks Tempy!! I really appreciate the Kudos and your observation of my writing skills. I truly appreciate it! :) Ken

Rhymer commented on Winter Witch

12-11-2009

Excellent write once again. I will be back to read more of your wonderful creations. Another 10 from me

knight4696

12/11/2009

THANKS Rhymer! :) Again .. I appreciate the time you take to read and comment on my works! I truly do! Thanks again ... Ken

Charlie23 commented on Winter Witch

12-08-2009

Damn her! Love your writings, Knight! Dark and light, every one of them awesome! The OP should have the option to subscribe to a poets feed, if the option was there I would certainly subscribe to yours as I'm a fan of your work! For the time being though, I guess I'll just have to keep my eyes peeled for new postings from you!

knight4696

12/08/2009

Charlie - I really appreciate your admiration! You have got to be my number one Fan! :) You know that I enjoy your works as well...You are an awesome writer! Thanks again for all of your wonderful comments. I really appreciate it! Your Friend, Ken

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