Emotional Inebriation

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Emotional Inebriation

You have an effect on me ...

~~~
I'd like to think I'm psychologically sound ~
But I get so fucked up,
whenever you're around.
I can't catch my breath, can't walk a straight line ~
I'm dizzy as hell,
and can't stop talking in rhyme!
~~~
You have an effect on me that I can't explain ~
Just the sight of you,
sets my heart aflame.
The smell of your perfume is so intoxicating ~
One whiff and I'm hooked,
your addict in the making!
~~~
I can't control myself whenever you're nearby ~
I can't move my limbs,
It's like I'm frozen in time!
This spell you cast has got me inebriated ~
Like a drunken fool,
I'm emotionally wasted!
~~~
This dreamlike state just impairs my vision ~
There's no way to stop,
this room from spinnin'!
I keep seeing doubles and I feel like I'm high ~
Can't escape your spell,
No matter how I try!
~~~
It really doesn't matter if it's frustrating ~
I have to admit,
It's kind of sedating!
A matter of fact, I enjoy this infactuation~
In my drunken stupor,
My emotional inebriation!
~~~

You have an effect on me ... 


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FranzJ commented on Emotional Inebriation

04-09-2010

enjoy it and do not let this love get away - - - - - - - - - -

knight4696

04/09/2010

Thanks FranzJ - I'm trying!!!!!! :) Lol! She is a brilliant poet herself and we have so much in common. Her beauty makes me drunk and her mind leaves me entranced ... If you haven't read her before.. check out her page "QueenotheKnight". Thanks again my friend! :) Ken

QueenotheKnight commented on Emotional Inebriation

03-26-2010

my love, you affect me in the very same way, and from your love never shall I stray, wrap your arms around my waist, and guide me with you the rest of life's way... I love you! :) xoxoxo

knight4696

03/27/2010

Babe - Together we may stumble from the sheer celebration - in a drunken love stupor we may trip in elation - but wherever we fall, we will do so in laughter - and we'll both know the pleasure of the morning after. There'll be no hangover and we'll be up for more fun - because there's always so much more where that came from! :) Love ya! :) xxxooo

earthly commented on Emotional Inebriation

03-24-2010

I usually don't read/like love poems, but this I like!! I do remember that feeling of being in love and how it can make you feel a little screwed up-lol-nice write...Earthly

knight4696

03/24/2010

Lol! A little? lol! Hell I'm drunk in love- she has the magic potion that I'm addicted too! lol! :) Thanks Earthy for your awesome comments! :) Ken

summerrose35 commented on Emotional Inebriation

03-23-2010

You better use caution,If you 'trip' you are going to fall hard!but it sounds like i may be too late! Enjoy the ride my friend!

knight4696

03/24/2010

Hey Tonya! Oh you're definately too late - I'm shit-faced! lol! Drunk in love and enjoying the ride! :) Ken

jademelissa74 commented on Emotional Inebriation

03-23-2010

Ok Ken, fine! I take the hint. I will refrain from visiting your page since I have such effect on you...hahahahah! Just kidding bud! This is a great piece...full of emotional evacuation and desire from within. You always have the right words to reel in the reader and keep them captured. Love your mind! God bless~

knight4696

03/24/2010

Lol! :) Thanks Erika! :) Honey - I'm shit-faced all the time lately! lol! jk - As you can see ... My romantic side is kicking in, But for good reason this time .. I am drunk in love! Thanks again! :) Ken

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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