Under The Autumn Moon

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The Moon ... need I say more. :)

Under The Autumn Moon

In the pale blue rays
Under the Autumn moon
Our naked skin glistens 
Fueling it's fire.
m
Hearts race 
Filled with anticipation
Labored breaths quicken
 Thick with desire.
m 
Soaking sweat .  
Sweet dew of our love.
With fingers clenched tightly
Souls dancing in tune.
m
Our moon lit naked bodies 
Entwined lie spent
Basking in the afterglow
Under the Autumn Moon


KjK
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Teardrops commented on Under The Autumn Moon

03-13-2010

truly beautiful my friend knight i bow to the talent of a skilled poet Marie

knight4696

03/14/2010

Thank you Marie :) This was the first poem I had written in about 10 yrs. I had stopped writing ... until I found OP. I'm happy you enjoyed it. Thanks again, Ken

am2anangel commented on Under The Autumn Moon

02-04-2010

very sensual write. vivid images displayed. Good write once again.

knight4696

02/06/2010

Thanks Angel - This poem was the first one I wrote after not having written for many years -- I had quite the dry spell ... :) Thanks again, Ken

tcmckinney commented on Under The Autumn Moon

01-30-2010

Thus a Sonnet of pure grace. Magnifying in detail and splendor. A twain fold sudection of one common in magnitude. Splendid. Author and Poet Todd Christopher McKinney

knight4696

01/30/2010

Thanks Todd for the wonderful review. I appreciate your insightful comments. A very formal signing indeed. :) Thanks again, Ken

Rhymer commented on Under The Autumn Moon

12-11-2009

Amazing how you can go from one end of the petry spectrum to the other and lose absoulutely nothing in talent or creativity. Enjoyed the read. 10 from me.

knight4696

12/11/2009

Thank you very much Rhymer! I appreciate your sentiments and Kudos on my differnt styles. I am truly humbled. Thx again ... Ken

jademelissa74 commented on Under The Autumn Moon

12-01-2009

Tsssssss...HOT! Ken, this write is eloquent and very thought-provoking. You keep stealing my attention with your great poetry. Thank you for sharing!

knight4696

12/01/2009

Thanks again Erika! Not bad for my first attempt at writing poetry in over 10 yrs huh? :) I figured If I was going to start writing ageain - it might as well be about a subject that everyone can relate to. LOL :) Thx again, Ken

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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