nocturnal (acrostic) classic rock

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this is my entry for the nocturnal acrostic challenge in the forum

nocturnal (acrostic) classic rock

no one here gets out alive
of course the lizard king didnt
crawling king snake the b-side
to l.a. woman
unhappy girl living in strange days
riders on the storm of a soft parade
not to touch the earth while waiting for the sun
alabama song playing five to one
laid to rest when the musics over

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SuSpence commented on nocturnal (acrostic) classic rock

09-11-2010

Terrific contribution to the challenge, a masterfully worked acrostic worthy of its intended tribute. The Doors truly were amazing, I choose the Beatles as my muse, but the Doors would have been a close 2nd but alas would have paled in comparison to this write. Excellant my friend. Peace and Love, Spence

Dano

09/11/2010

i love the doors music and jim is one of my all time favorite writer/poet/story tellers... thanks for the comment

Rhymer commented on nocturnal (acrostic) classic rock

08-28-2010

So much talent wielded in your pen. Like your style and imagination. 10

Dano

08/30/2010

thank you very much rhymer... you presents on my page is always welcomed

ginga commented on nocturnal (acrostic) classic rock

08-22-2010

Dano, Your assignment gets an A from me. The Doors rock! ginga

Dano

08/25/2010

thank ginga this was a fun write

WordSlinger commented on nocturnal (acrostic) classic rock

08-20-2010

I see this as a challenge, that you are on your way to be a conquer, for sure, ya, TY WS

Dano

08/20/2010

thanks for stopping by...

Tempy commented on nocturnal (acrostic) classic rock

08-20-2010

truly had a rhythm all of its own, very nice flow energetic throughout

Dano

08/20/2010

thank for taking the time to read and comment

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

Dano’s Poems (150)

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Title Comments
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searching the darkness 10
a letter from santa 14
thanksgiving (acrostic) 12
the depth of... 11
ive wished 7
absentee 12
this is... 13
a journey into the dark 7
the cold of november 14
your voice 12
the yin to the yang 14
twisted 9
autumn 14
i think it happened again 11
luna~tic 19
the darkness 13
a blinding eclipse 16
the universe... 18
the wind of sorrow 14
my sorrow weeps 16
where but the dark... 12
immortal kiss 47
in a darkened room 17
our mother 7
within these flames 12
nocturnal (acrostic) classic rock 7
behind wrought iron bars 25
what i write (part 2) 8
today 17
the world in grey 6
the reality of... 5
in the shadow of a mountain 6
nothing will ever be the same 10
of cemetary dreams (and nightmare scapes) 12
next to a bed... 18
but... 15
at a funeral 12
seventeen (acrostic) 11
the fortunate one(s) 7
what did i do... 24
ashes to dust 45
dancing in the moonlight 14
disempowering the pain 14
the butterfly 10
what i write 14
sorry (i killed the after glow) 11
the humidity rises (an erotic tale) 9
pieces of light 8
the sad pumpkin &... 9
my face 12
for a long time... 14
(an explination of) distractions 6
tell me... 6
the charelston cookie tin 9
silent self destruction 8
exposed 13
the means of the day (a true valentines poem) 2
a poem about nothing... 8
blood bleeds black 7
dissecting myself 3
i will be just fine 3
the stacking of bricks 3
the complexities of depression... 4
spirits & ghosts 3
**random chaos** 2
bloodlust 3
...somethings missing... 2
15 years... 3
beauty sleeps entombed (parts 1 & 2) 3
**untitled** 2
the overstuffed closet 3
the candy dish 2
anxiety speaks 2
**untitled** 2
myself and the light 6
the fog 2
fire and tears 3
cerebral meltdown 3
sometimes i wish... 1
drawing strength from a starr... 2
disappointmen
t...
1
**untitled** 1
the flower garden 3
nature... 1
reaching out 2
the dark and the light... 1
the insistent demon 2
sorry... 3
forgive me lover... (parts 1 & 2) 2
im so sorry... 3
**no title... just random thoughts** 1
to eternity... 2
winter wind whips... 1
tired 2
lucid dream 1
the rains came... 2
the mourning light 1
another jagged pill 1
i just cant... 1
entitlement?!
?!?
1
entitlement!!
!!
1
burning within 4
inside of me 1
projected pain 1
the night... the dakness & the truth? 1
panic 2
the mourning fog 1
when the fires burn 1
through the night 1
shadow casts 0
a mournful rain 1
i cant protect me 2
my comfort place 0
an echo shifts 1
the monster 2
welcome to my life 0
the past is alive... 1
... 1
standing on the edge 2
my smile... 1
anxiety 2
my reality 0
another view... 0
untitled... 0
jagged pill 2
in the dark 1
what to do 1
how can i... 1
life... 3
a crust of pain 1
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my dark world 3
another night of wondering 2
in the attic 4
i hold most dear 2
the me inside of me 2
another day 1
dreamed in a dream 2
a year in the life (dealing with death) 1
i look... 1
where my secrets are kept 1
a mouthful of words 2
i will not fear (when my eyes are blind) 2
i am aware (i'm already dead) 7
standing in the silence of my own shadow... 3
a blinding dark 1
growing pain 3
the longest of nights 5
... 7