sorry (i killed the after glow)

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sorry (i killed the after glow)

thanks baby i had fun last night
it felt good to feel good for awhile
to forget about me and
focus on us
forget about pain
and focus on love


im sorry that once again ive regressed but
you know i am still depressed
i was able to let go and clear my mind
a least for alittle while last night


im sorry that it all came back in
this morning when i was alone again
sorry it seems that i am too weak to fight
honestly i really do try


i just get so wrapped up in my own head
the anxiety and the dread
i really feel guilty that i cried today
im sorry im not sure what else to say

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Chela commented on sorry (i killed the after glow)

04-16-2010

OMG!!! I love ur writing....and this is so true, you can get away 4 a while n everything is so good n feels so great then when u go back 2 reality it's like everything hits u....u don't want 2 return but u have no option....Uuuggh!

Dano

04/17/2010

seems to that you really get it... thanks for reading

Madelynn commented on sorry (i killed the after glow)

04-12-2010

This poem reminds me of my son.-thank you for sharing this piece, it holds all your poetic depth, and owns a well-dressed personal touch..hope all is well,-and always remember, dark days will always come, as sure as the sun will rise! However so, they will also pass, and the light will shine brighter because those black days exist!-smiles,Maddi

Dano

04/12/2010

thanks for reading and taking the time to comment maddi...

Fallenangel87 commented on sorry (i killed the after glow)

04-11-2010

Sounds Like you and I have a lot in common. great poem. Keep it up. -fallenangel87-

Dano

04/12/2010

thanks again for reading my work

MarionYost commented on sorry (i killed the after glow)

04-11-2010

wow, That's a border line tear jerker.. You found ALL of the words that I could never say. Great job once again. All the best -Marion-

Dano

04/12/2010

tear jerker? thanks again for reading

BringMeBullets commented on sorry (i killed the after glow)

04-08-2010

Ahhh... The emotion of a dark write. It captivates the heart and stings the bruises on the surface of a broken mind... Sometimes it's hard not to be sad, but we have always found a way around for at least a little while. Great write. A ten from me. Thank you for sharing.

Dano

04/09/2010

your comments are always so encouraging... thank you

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

Dano’s Poems (150)

Title Comments
Title Comments
from an angels view 19
searching the darkness 10
a letter from santa 14
thanksgiving (acrostic) 12
the depth of... 11
ive wished 7
absentee 12
this is... 13
a journey into the dark 7
the cold of november 14
your voice 12
the yin to the yang 14
twisted 9
autumn 14
i think it happened again 11
luna~tic 19
the darkness 13
a blinding eclipse 16
the universe... 18
the wind of sorrow 14
my sorrow weeps 16
where but the dark... 12
immortal kiss 47
in a darkened room 17
our mother 7
within these flames 12
nocturnal (acrostic) classic rock 7
behind wrought iron bars 25
what i write (part 2) 8
today 17
the world in grey 6
the reality of... 5
in the shadow of a mountain 6
nothing will ever be the same 10
of cemetary dreams (and nightmare scapes) 12
next to a bed... 18
but... 15
at a funeral 12
seventeen (acrostic) 11
the fortunate one(s) 7
what did i do... 24
ashes to dust 45
dancing in the moonlight 14
disempowering the pain 14
the butterfly 10
what i write 14
sorry (i killed the after glow) 11
the humidity rises (an erotic tale) 9
pieces of light 8
the sad pumpkin &... 9
my face 12
for a long time... 14
(an explination of) distractions 6
tell me... 6
the charelston cookie tin 9
silent self destruction 8
exposed 13
the means of the day (a true valentines poem) 2
a poem about nothing... 8
blood bleeds black 7
dissecting myself 3
i will be just fine 3
the stacking of bricks 3
the complexities of depression... 4
spirits & ghosts 3
**random chaos** 2
bloodlust 3
...somethings missing... 2
15 years... 3
beauty sleeps entombed (parts 1 & 2) 3
**untitled** 2
the overstuffed closet 3
the candy dish 2
anxiety speaks 2
**untitled** 2
myself and the light 6
the fog 2
fire and tears 3
cerebral meltdown 3
sometimes i wish... 1
drawing strength from a starr... 2
disappointmen
t...
1
**untitled** 1
the flower garden 3
nature... 1
reaching out 2
the dark and the light... 1
the insistent demon 2
sorry... 3
forgive me lover... (parts 1 & 2) 2
im so sorry... 3
**no title... just random thoughts** 1
to eternity... 2
winter wind whips... 1
tired 2
lucid dream 1
the rains came... 2
the mourning light 1
another jagged pill 1
i just cant... 1
entitlement?!
?!?
1
entitlement!!
!!
1
burning within 4
inside of me 1
projected pain 1
the night... the dakness & the truth? 1
panic 2
the mourning fog 1
when the fires burn 1
through the night 1
shadow casts 0
a mournful rain 1
i cant protect me 2
my comfort place 0
an echo shifts 1
the monster 2
welcome to my life 0
the past is alive... 1
... 1
standing on the edge 2
my smile... 1
anxiety 2
my reality 0
another view... 0
untitled... 0
jagged pill 2
in the dark 1
what to do 1
how can i... 1
life... 3
a crust of pain 1
keeping me weak... 2
my dark world 3
another night of wondering 2
in the attic 4
i hold most dear 2
the me inside of me 2
another day 1
dreamed in a dream 2
a year in the life (dealing with death) 1
i look... 1
where my secrets are kept 1
a mouthful of words 2
i will not fear (when my eyes are blind) 2
i am aware (i'm already dead) 7
standing in the silence of my own shadow... 3
a blinding dark 1
growing pain 3
the longest of nights 5
... 7