The End


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    Food for thought. One of many scenarios that might come to pass.

    The End

    It began somewhere deep within the universe

    as a gentle humming sound so faint that even the

    most advanced of the million or so civilizations

    that inhabit the stars did not detect it.

    The hum slowly grew louder over a span of ten million

      years until it reached such a pitch that slight vibrations

    reached nearby galaxies.

    Within the next twenty million years the hum and the

     vibrations became so intense that stars within a million

    light years exploded scattering matter to all ends of the universe.

    After 40 million years no galaxies had been spared and the universe

    was filled with only dust as if some unseen power had

     unleashed its wrath in order to purify that which had been contaminated.

    All civilizations no matter

     how rich

     or powerful

     or advanced

    succumbed and The End brought forth a new beginning.


    ©Copyright Charlie Gragg September 7, 2010



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    stellar commented on The End


    I've just watch the universe in discovery and yes..there is really a big probability that the universe will fade because of that dark energy...and this made me realize what are civilizations for if it is going to end...^_^ v



    The question remains as to whether all endings bring about new beginnings. Thanks for visiting.

    gmcookie commented on The End


    Hampton, This is a powerful meditation that reminds us now insignificant we actually are. It is very thought provoking. I did a piece a while back about the death and rebirth of the universe. You might enjoy reading it: . What I tried to do was figure out how God would fit into all this. Scientists are now saying that universes are cyclical and eventually collapse in on themselves then at the point of maximum compression - Bang! Each universe has a big bang and starts all over. Our universe might have done this billions of times already and with possibly hundreds of billions of universes out there, what does that say about the nature of God? Although my poem sounds cynical at first, it's really hopeful if you read it carefully. That's the same feeling I get from your piece here, that there is a continuity that transcends any single individual, planet, solar system, galaxy or universe...



    Thank you for your thoughtful comments. I will read your write On The Point of a Pin before the sun sets today.

    JadedJezzabel commented on The End


    Well said my friend!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you rocked this!!!!!!!!!!!!!



    Nice of you to say. Thanks.

    Rhymer commented on The End


    Excellent write I like the sci-fi sort of theme in this write. A very interesting read,



    Thank you very much.

    gogant commented on The End


    Hey Hamp, maybe this is what we have to look forward to on December 21, 2012...........The descriptive words you use make this a very fascinating read...........Extraordinary...................g



    You may well be right my friend. Thanks.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

    Hampton’s Poems (111)

    Title Comments
    Title Comments
    Searching 5
    The Poetess 14
    Nonsense 12
    Solitude 18
    Lame Limericks 14
    Message to Papa 15
    Young Jimmy O’Fallon 11
    The Computer From Hell 18
    Life Ain’t for Sissies 16
    The Mind In Motion 13
    The Game of Poetry 9
    Silence 55
    WordSlinger 19
    Holiday Thoughts 12
    Sweet Mary 18
    From White to Grey to Black 19
    The Reckoning 12
    And All of That Jazz 16
    Today 25
    No Offense, Just My Opinion 16
    Lucky 10
    You’re Only as Old as You Feel 13
    Saturday Night 13
    Political Change? 14
    The Female Gender 17
    I’m In Charge Here, Aren’t I? ( With Epilogue) 10
    I’m In Charge Here, Aren’t I? 7
    Remembering 11
    This Web We Weave 13
    The End 16
    The Day the Clouds Cried 16
    The Path of Life 12
    My Mother Ruth 12
    Humanities Challenge 14
    A Cowboy's Perspective 12
    July in Buda Texas 14
    The OP Poets Parade 20
    The Chatelaine 12
    Shot Through the Heart 17
    Poetry and Fine Wine 18
    The Man What Am 10
    The Final Beat of My Heart 16
    The Rainbow of Poets 19
    A Cowboy's Lament 13
    Of This World I am Not 17
    The Wee People 19
    An Evening at an Irish Pub 15
    The Scent of Love 14
    Fresh News from Buda Texas 16
    Memories of Times Past 13
    The Dance of the Poets 20
    The Confession 14
    Road to Obscurity 18
    Barbara 14
    Shadows 15
    Prescience 17
    Words That Bind 54
    Wondering 26
    New Year News from Buda Texas 13
    We Are All Witnesses 16
    Christmas 25
    A Cowboy’s Prayer 29
    The 9 ers 24
    Love Defined 27
    Tis a Time to Give Thanks 21
    More News From Buda Texas 26
    Choices 26
    News from Buda, Texas 21
    In Search of God 21
    Writers of Poems (WOPs) 26
    Out of the Darkness 15
    Visions from Within the Mist 18
    Baseball 12
    The Night Stalker 16
    The Man I Presume to be Buck 16
    The Sounds of Time 17
    The Little Man in the Green Hat 18
    Blah Blah Blah 14
    One Two Three 13
    Carpe Viam 11
    Love in the Afternoon 13
    The Moth 14
    Lost & Dungeons of the Mind 11
    The Creative Process 19
    The Truth and the Tribe 19
    The Long Wait. 19
    Feathers 26
    The Arrow 14
    Take Two Cialis and Call Me in the Morning 26
    Ghostly Images 16
    Friends 11
    Angels Without Wings 20
    The Rider 16
    Pride and Shame 18
    The Winning Poet is.... 21
    Memories 13
    Politicians 67
    Your Mailbox Is Empty 18
    God's Visit 17
    Poets and Poems 20
    Love Thy Neighbor 13
    Renewal 8
    The Roar of Silence 17
    Blessed Are These Days 4
    Time and Space 5
    Life's Journey 8
    Gift To The Fallen 16
    Hunger 21
    The Antique Shop 30