A Thousand Thorns

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    A Thousand Thorns

    I didn't write this poem....

    But there is a story behind it.  25 years ago (before the first Gulf War) I was working in Kuwait on a computer system at the Ministry of Foreign Affairs.  The system was sensitive in nature and one of the Kuwaiti programmers on the project was named Mohammed.  (Yes, I realize that there are a lot of Mohammeds there, but after all these years I can't recall his last name.)

    This is his poem.  He had gone to school somewhere in the United States and liked to hone his English skills by writing English language poetry.  I have always loved this little verse he wrote:

    She didn't die of a thousand thorns
    As everyone supposes,
    The thing that really killed her was
    The simple lack of roses.

    I don't know what ever happened to Mohammed.  I do know that prior to the first US invasion of Iraq (and the liberation of Kuwait), Sadaam Hussein boxed up the system, loaded it on trucks and moved it from Kuwait to Baghdad.  His cronies were making calls to some of the American contractors who had built the system offering them huge rewards if they could get the system up and running in Iraq.  As far as I know, he never found a taker.

    But I suppose, that before he started calling the US, he would have looked for Mohammed first....  Whether he survived the war or not, I have no way of knowing.

    If you are out there, Mohammed, and I didn't get your poem right, please accept my appologies.  And for those mis-guided souls who think all Muslims are cold blooded terrorists I would pose this question.  Do these sound like the words of a terrorist?

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    WordSlinger commented on A Thousand Thorns

    06-24-2010

    Love this, and I agree. Rhafiqam in the OP School forum is teaching Urdu poetry and Ghazals, they are beautiful, I have done some research, and most poets, have great poems like your friends stanza here, love it ty WS

    Teardrops commented on A Thousand Thorns

    06-23-2010

    The poem is beautiful it shows your respect and love for this man . But his poem to me means she was never treated kindly by anyone . Great write marie

    gmcookie

    06/24/2010

    Teardoeps, I think you're right. It sounds like she never received the affection she deserved. But it says something else to me as well. It says that we can deal with the thorns as long as we get a few roses along the way... It implies a certain amount of strength. I think that is a really positive statement.

    rsalassi commented on A Thousand Thorns

    06-23-2010

    The poem is cute, but your posting both interesting and touching.

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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