Free Lunch

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This morning's ferry poem... Still a work in process. enjoy..

Free Lunch

If there ever was a free lunch
Then I haven't found it yet
You get but what you pay for
And you pay for all you get
Those who can will labor
And those who won't or can't
Must bear in mind the story of
The grasshopper and ant
The work is often dreary
The recompense is slim
The end, it seems, is frequently
Both premature and grim
Then God extracts his ten percent
And Caesar takes his share
But after that it seems as if
There's nothing really there
So we plop down on the sofa
In the darkness and the gloom
And let reality TV
Consume our living room
That mindless darkened living room
Can breed so much malaise
The answer's not less taxes
It's not a bigger raise
The blame lies not on others
Those resentments that we've felt
Arise from inability
To play the cards we're dealt
Cause when the push comes down to shove
The ladder we must climb
Is really very much about
The way we spend our time
Turn off the tube; go read a book
Go strolling in the park
Go do some volunteer work
Choose the sunlight not the dark
And when you've learned to play guitar
Or tutored kids in need
Or cooked those meals for older folks
Who no one else would feed
And when you've worked to make this world
Somehow a better place
Then look into the mirror and
Admire that smiling face
If there ever was a free lunch
I haven't found it yet
You get but what you pay for
And you pay for all you get

Those who can will labor
And those who won't or can't
Must keep in mind the story of
The grasshopper and ant

 
The work is often dreary
The recompense is slim
The end, it seems, is frequently
Both premature and grim

 
Then Jesus takes his ten percent
And Caesar takes his share
But after that it seems as if
There's nothing really there

 
So we plop down on the sofa
In the darkness and the gloom
And let reality TV
Consume our living room

 
That mindless darkened living room
Can breed so much malaise
The answer's not less taxes
It's not a bigger raise

 
The blame lies not on others
Those resentments that we've felt
Arise from inability
To play the cards we're dealt

 
Cause when the push comes down to shove
The ladder we must climb
Is really very much about
The way we spend our time

 
Turn off the tube; go read a book
Go strolling in the park
Go do some volunteer work
Choose sunlight over dark

 
And when you've learned to play guitar
Or tutored kids to read
Or cooked those meals for older folks
Who no one else would feed

 
And when you've worked to make this world
Somehow a better place
Go look into the mirror and
Admire that smiling face

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Teardrops commented on Free Lunch

06-01-2011

I saddle a horse barrel race and hope i can still make the turns like the 20 year olds . When that gets to not be fun i will spend more time playing drums and riding into the sunset like Roy and Dale Great poem really amazing Marie

Helios commented on Free Lunch

05-31-2011

Bac Glen, I always did like your morning ferry inspiration. I tell you the truth, if you keep this up, you can write a book called The Morning Ferry and Other Poems [ have you thought about it?]. I once watched a movie, I think it was Finding Forrester, and Sir Sean Connery said "You must write your first draft with your heart. You rewrite with your head." Sometimes, besides for minor mistakes, I do not think you need to edit the reflection behind your works.

gmcookie

05/31/2011

Helios, I'd have to agree with Sir Connery. I write these in a relatively short time then re-write them for weeks afterwords. They get better over time. This morning's work is "Barney the Badger". Its still rough, but I am constantly re-writing...

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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