Ruth

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New draft.... I still have a few scansion problems with this but it's a good start...

Ruth

Diogenes she should have been,
Though her mother named her Ruth.
She, like that old Diogenes,
Preoccupied with truth.

She's looking for that honest man
With her shuffling, halting gait,
Just roaming through the urban streets
Her never ending fate.

She has no magic lantern to
Sort the truth out from the lies.
She only has her shopping cart,
And intuition's eyes.

And now that she is bent and grey,
So that none would take her hand,
Relentlessly she searches on,
Still looking for that man.

She's found the theives and criminals,
She's seen preditors and crooks,
She's found the rogues and scallywags,
There, hiding in the nooks.

She's searched in daylight, searched in night,
She's searched every vale and hill,
Yet never found her honest man,
She probably never will.

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rsalassi commented on Ruth

04-01-2011

Since my sister is named Ruth, I read this with greater interest than otherwise. I like the predator line.

Teardrops commented on Ruth

02-19-2011

You bring to life the woman or man on the street then it could be anyone of us searching for the honest man . Maybe to lead our country or just tell us the turth for a change and the picture just brings it alive so much more . Loved it Marie

JeffBQ commented on Ruth

02-19-2011

Wow...what an observatiion! I read this and read it again... I appreciate your ability to see possibility in the norm and your ability to make it come to life...Good job glad I stopped to read it JeffBQ

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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