Taxi to Eternity

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First draft of my new sci-fi poem. Written on Easter Day - on my iPhone whenever I had a few free moments in my hectic schedule. I haven't hammered the prosody into shape yet, but will go over it with a hammer and file and try to smooth that out a bit.

Taxi to Eternity

The April rain, in rivulets,
Runs down the window panes,
Through which I gaze in silent thought,
For little time remains.

Impressionistic willow trees,
Upon the grassy hills,
The mottled yellow crocuses,
The blurry daffodils.

I chose to leave this all behind,
This planet of my birth
To sign up on a starship
And to bid farewell to earth.

You've got to be, well, self contained
To venture into space,
Not bound by love nor sentiment,
Not bound by time nor place.

‘Cause traveling at light speed means
That time arrests it's flow.
You blink your eyes and in a flash
The eons come and go.

So if I ever make it home
All this will just be rust,
Or buried underneath the sands,
Or blown away in dust.

The deed is done, the contract signed.
The taxi comes for me.
The wait is just a little time,
Yet seems eternity.

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stigbohnolsen commented on Taxi to Eternity

04-28-2011

I love it. I really do hope we make it long enough to explore other worlds.

gmcookie

04/28/2011

Oh you will, Stig. At my age I'm not so sure I'll be there. But, cheeze, won't that be something...

Phission commented on Taxi to Eternity

04-27-2011

well written, just like eveything you do. some have it and some do not. you do, my friend.

gmcookie

04/27/2011

Aww, Shucks. Thanks for the compliment my friend. I'm glad you enjoyed the piece. It's sort of autobiographical. I enlisted in the Army during the Vietnam war. I remember waiting for that taxi to come wondering if I'd come home alive. It wasn't raining raining.... but it was bitterly cold. It was just more poetic to leave in the spring. hehe

Teardrops commented on Taxi to Eternity

04-25-2011

To be the path finder for mankind sounds amazing . YOu make me see space and the thrill of being in space . Really looking forward to more poems like this Marie

gmcookie

04/26/2011

Marie, Thank you for reading this stuff... The site is pretty dead these days. It's always good to hear your voice out there in the dark. It's something to comfort me as I settle in for such a long space flight... Say, if you aren't tied down out there on your Oklahoma ranch, why don't you come with me? We can go to Alpha Centari and catch a flight to the Andromeda Galaxy or something.

Teardrops

04/26/2011

Hey i got two weeks of freedom I usually go diving in fa. But I would rather be in the stars with you anytime . Marie

gmcookie

04/26/2011

Yeah.... Well, I'm still waiting for that damn taxi! hehe

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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