Love's End

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    Love's End

     "All good things must someday end."
    Is not entirely true.
    It doesn't take into account
    The way I feel for you.

    If all the stars came unglued
    And fell into the sea
    I would still be there, my love
    And you would be with me.

    If the sun should fade to black,
    A cinder up above,
    It would not change the simple fact
    That we have dared to love.

    If time itself one day runs out
    And all the world stands still
    We'll hold hands and watch it end
    From some forgotten hill.

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    purdylox commented on Love's End

    07-24-2011

    wow ................... all I can say is that is just wow
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    Chaos128 commented on Love's End

    06-16-2010

    I strongly suspect you go about composing your work in much the same way I do, and I guess it would be self-serving for me to say (as I've said earlier) that you're efforts come closer to constituting the definition of the craft rather than serving as mere examples. Now that I've gotten the mea culpas out of the way, "Love's End" is four-on-the-floor, dyed-in-the-wool, Katy-bar the-door perfect.
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    gmcookie

    06/16/2010

    Chaos, well.. when I was a kid it was four-on-the-floor and a fifth under the seat! hehe Thanks for your kind words, my friend.

    ginga commented on Love's End

    04-19-2010

    cookie, A simply wondrous poem of revelation that proves the skeptics wrong. I loved the free flowing verse, rhyme and brevity of it all. ginga
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    Tinytree commented on Love's End

    03-02-2010

    Beautiful.....to expereince that love is priceless and timeless. Well done.
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    gmcookie

    03/02/2010

    That's very kind of you, Tiny. Thank you for your feedback, my friend.

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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