Beowulf

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Another piece in iambic pentameter. Like Icarus, this vignette offers insight into the thinking of someone destined to be called "legendary", and into what might have been going through his mind.

Beowulf

Because the crows were screaming in the night,
Yet crickets chose to hold their evening song,
I knew of your approach through shadows deep,
I knew the wait would not be very long.
And so I steeled my nerves for your attack
And leveraged my advantage, for you see
While I had ample cause to be afraid,
You had no cause to be afraid of me.
Quite well I knew that evil could not bide
When virtue chose to put it to the run,
That darkness had no choice but to subside
Confronted by the morning's rising sun.
And so I stayed and held my ground that night
For history would mark that fight as when
I slew the Grendel beast and laid to rest
The nighttime fear that chained the hearts of men
Because the crows were screaming in the night,
Yet crickets chose to hold their evening song,
I knew of your approach through shadows deep,
I knew the wait would not be very long.

And so I steeled my nerves for your attack,
And leveraged my advantage, for you see,
While I had ample cause to be afraid,
You had no cause to be afraid of me.

But well I knew that evil could not bide
When virtue chose to put it on the run,
That darkness had no choice but to subside
Confronted by the morning's rising sun.

And so I stayed and held my ground that night.
For history would mark that fight as when
I slew the Grendel beast and laid to rest
The nighttime fear that chained the hearts of men.

Yet life is seldom simple nor truth clear.
In mortal strife I looked into your eye
And sensed It was revenge that drove you on.
You were a beast but still I don't know why.

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dahlusion commented on Beowulf

03-02-2013

the intensity in this piece has the perfect creepy edge that kept me swallowing word after word. beautifully composed and presented. "That darkness had no choice but to subside Confronted by the morning's rising sun"—this is unique!

gmcookie

03/02/2013

Thanks Dah. I thought you'd enjoy reading this one. I had a typo in there in the next to the last line. I just fixed it. Keep writing, my friend.

poett commented on Beowulf

03-02-2013

Loved the last part... life is seldom simple nor truth clear. In mortal strife I looked into your eye And sensed It was revenge that drove on. You were a beast but still I know not why... It made it so intense n emotional... Love it

gmcookie

03/02/2013

Thanks Poett. Originally when I posted it I only had the first 4 verses. It seemed overly simplistic to me. If you remember the story, the Grendel didn't attack people to feed, and it only attacked the warriors, never the women or children. So I figured there had to be more to the story than mere animal instinct. That's why I added the final verse. I'm glad you feel that it added to the piece... hehe Thanks again, my friend.

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