Ray's Dream

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    Poem Commentary

    Another "Bus Poem" - written on the bus this morning enroute to work. (I work on computers, can you tell?)

    Ray's Dream

    I wonder what it would be like
    If we awoke one day
    To find machines we proudly built
    Had passed us in the fray?
    We'd have to take a back seat in
    Life's little cabaret.

    Will robots write the poetry?
    While computers favor song?
    Will artificial brains that day
    Distinguish right from wrong?
    Will armies of mechanica
    All learn to get along?

    Will love become outmoded in
    Some distant future place?
    Will loyalty mean anything
    In deepest void of space?
    Or will our cyborg children launch
    Another weapons race?

    The younger generation seems
    To think that they're so bright.
    Somehow it always works that way
    It seems to be our plight.
    This time its quite different 'cause
    The robots will be right!

    But we are not there yet, thank God!
    And therefore it would seem
    We need to raise our children well,
    To teach them how to dream,
    Make certain they learn song and verse,
    And even self esteem.

    Perhaps some day when I grow old
    In my cottage by the sea,
    My cyborg kids will gather round
    For lively repartee.
    And we'll discuss Descartes and Kant,
    How noble love can be.
    Perhaps we'll then de-frag our disks
    O'er buttered scones and tea.

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    devaamido commented on Ray's Dream

    03-03-2011

    Another great poem by the "Computer-Man". Maybe "feelings", like love, or envy, or lust are simply epiphenomena?...given a large enough storage space & fast enough retrieval??

    gmcookie

    03/03/2011

    Hehe... I thought you might like that one. Thanks for the comment, my friend.

    BlackButterfly1 commented on Ray's Dream

    07-09-2010

    This is an excellent poem. Witty but makes you think!

    missEleven commented on Ray's Dream

    07-08-2010

    the day they start to f____ is the day we will really see trouble.

    gmcookie

    07/08/2010

    Lol... Hey, that may happen some day... hehe

    rsalassi commented on Ray's Dream

    07-05-2010

    You pose the question, then answer it, and close with a delicious piece of humor that only at first seems funny, and then becomes reflective. Marvelous!

    jyothi commented on Ray's Dream

    07-02-2010

    You showed the feeling of machines taking the place of humanity and consideration.Like it.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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