Our Lives

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This morning's ferry poem. This one came out fairly clean - at least for a new work. I'll revisit it over the next few days and see what tweaks it needs. Enjoy, my friends.

Our Lives

In the springtime of our lives
All the buds begin to ope',
The stems reach ever skyward,
While the branches fill with hope.

In the warming sun and rain
Life will ripen as it thrives,
In the gentleness and nurture
Of the springtime of our lives.

In the summer of our lives
All the clouds will part above,
We will bask in the hot sun
Of our newly minted love.

We will celebrate our bodies,
Perhaps more than is wise,
In the soft halcyon breezes
Of the summer of our lives.

In the autumn of our lives
We will feel the first cold frost.
Our deeds will meet fruition.
Our illusions will be lost.

We will feel the sting of fate;
We will know the truth from lies
As we reap what we have sewn
In the autumn of our lives.

In the winter of our lives
We will share the company
Of those we've snubbed or nurtured
On life's tempest harried sea.

As the final curtain closes,
As cold death at last arrives,
The world will judge our value
In the winter of our lives.

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rsalassi commented on Our Lives

01-08-2011

gee, I feel I've acquired a whole year's wisdom with this superlative write. Thanks.

ginga commented on Our Lives

01-02-2011

cookie, The coming full circle in this poem is a format I always enjoy especially when the highlights are written with passion and purpose. ty ginga

Seongwoo commented on Our Lives

01-02-2011

I enjoyed your rhythm. And the four seasons are in your hands.

Phission commented on Our Lives

12-30-2010

you are a genius. or at least your poetry leads me to believe this. 10 !

gmcookie

12/30/2010

Lol... Thanks, my friend. But I think there are more than a few of those around this site. You just need to know which rock to turn over...

HarverTomsson commented on Our Lives

12-30-2010

Must be something in that salt air asea. . . I really enjoyed the philosophy and perspective couched in this poem. Harv

gmcookie

12/30/2010

Lol... funny how our minds run amuck sometimes. It's getting chilly out. The seasons are turning, methinks.

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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