Mayflies

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First draft... It will need some tweaking, I'm certain, in coming weeks. As always, feedback is welcome...

Mayflies

How petty the affairs of men,
How trivial they are,
Upon their mote spun deep in space
Round some forgotten star.

One of a hundred billion stars
In a galaxy unknown,
Yet in the vastness they call space
Quite frankly, all alone.

A hundred billion galaxies
In a universe unnamed,
And countless universes too
By spacetime fabric framed.

Though brutish human lives are short,
Like mayflies they assay
To cram their whole existence in
One single cosmic day.

How impudent! What hubris!
To think that they are kings
Not only of the earth, but of,
Creation - of all things!

Yet what a day those mayflies live,
They frolic, feast and breed
As if these paltry given hours
Were all the time they need.

They struggle to improve themselves,
They fill their lives with awe,
They contemplate the universe,
Decipher cosmic law,

They live to love, they love to learn,
They learn to laugh and sing.
In their small niche of time and space
The cosmos surely ring.

For hundreds of parsecs around
Space lies but cold and dark,
Yet there, on that unlikely speck,
Life's truly left it's mark!

So live and love and mayflies, build,
For though your lives be short,
Together you may yet transcend
Your little fly resort...

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missEleven commented on Mayflies

07-08-2010

;)mayflies in a fly resort , enjoyed this through

Rhymer commented on Mayflies

07-08-2010

The mayfly an insignificant insect compared to humanity. Humanity an insignificant creation when compared to the universe, you make us feel so small. 10 for this excellent write.

Teardrops commented on Mayflies

07-08-2010

I love your view of life .Think i will stay on your rock . Great poem my friend Marie

Chaos128 commented on Mayflies

07-08-2010

ha ha Like it? I love it! Those mischief making mayflies might not be the hottest property (on a REALLY big block), but they're the hottest they know about, and got no problem letting themselves (and any other bugs who might be listening in) know about it : D

rsalassi commented on Mayflies

07-08-2010

I do like it,GM, as apparently do you. We (MAN) really is a marvel (as Twain would say), thinking he's the creator, or if not the creator, the creator's pet. Look it up; it's hysterical. You've captured our insignificance quite well.

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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