Choice

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I'm feeling a little set upon today. I guess that comes out in this poem. I think this one needs to be dedicated to Chaos128. He is my role model when it comes to in-your-face poetry... Enjoy!

Choice

What we should fear most in life
Are those who have no doubt,
The ones who know the answers
To what it's all about,

The ones who never question,
Nor pause to stop and think,
Who never need to bother
To hypothesize or link

Effect to cause, proof to fact,
Nor untangle truth from lies,
But buy the entire dogma
Replete with warts and flies

Then cram it all down our throat
Just as far as it it will go,
(Because we all are Bozos
And they are in the know).

Not quite so fast there buddy!
Although I will defend
Your right to an opinion
Up to the bitter end,

I get my own opinion,
You can't force yours on me.
Sometimes we're gonna differ,
Sometimes we may agree.

You can fish on your side,
While I will fish on mine.
With mutual restraint
We'll get along just fine.

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Balladeer commented on Choice

11-13-2010

Lots of wisdom in this one! Those who have all the answers seldom have any....and still it doesn't stop them from telling you how right they are and how wrong you are. Sort of reminds me of the bumper sticker that reads "Dear God, please protect me from your followers". Enjoyed the write....

Deadboysdontcry commented on Choice

11-11-2010

I love it this poem was really in fast past and true.

NenaT commented on Choice

10-30-2010

Ha ha, just what we are thinking when we bite our tongue!

Kanicki commented on Choice

10-26-2010

Bravo!!! I love this one; this one goes into my favs! Great Write! I love your style and many would agree with me...LOL Peace, Light and Love.

gmcookie

10/27/2010

Thanks Kiddo... After reading some of your poems I sort of figured you'd like this one. We have all met people like this... hehe

Kanicki

10/27/2010

Oh yes we have my dear:) And these folks will argue the flour out of bread; only to convince one of their further ignorance...LOL It leave a bitter taste and lends a deaf ear...LOL he he...he who professes to know it all is full of ignorance; in the words of a comedian who's name escapes me at the moment, ignorance is bliss, I don't know what that means but I'm happy anyway...tee he. LOL

aggieprof commented on Choice

10-21-2010

Love it, love it, loveit!!! How appropriate and timely with all the current political crap. Also very well done and executed.

gmcookie

10/21/2010

Thank you Professor... I think we have all run into these folks from time to time. I hope you are doing well down there in Texas and that your new wife is a "keeper"! hehe

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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