Back Side of the Moon

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    Hot off the presses... Written on the Ferry today. Another poem in my sci-fi poetry series. Still a bit rough, but a decent start. Enjoy the read.

    Back Side of the Moon

     

    On the back side of the moon,
    Under miles of ancient rocks,
    The robots scurry to and fro
    Extracting square cut blocks
    Of rare earth metal ores
    (Lanthanides, there're called).
    They all get strapped to rolling stock
    And then by rail are hauled
    To smelters on the surface
    The metals are refined,
    And shuttles haul the ingots to
    Fixed Orbit Station Nine.
    A massive operation and
    Quite lucrative it seems.
    How great is man's ambition and
    How greedy are his dreams.
    While the robots do the heavy work
    Some people are here too,
    For patching up these hunks of junk,
    (The Lunar Fixit Crew).
    Our work is done in terminals.
    But sometimes we must go
    Outside the station's pressure dome,
    Beneath the star light's glow.
    My contract is for seven years.
    I guess that point is moot.
    I dropped a carbide cutting tool 
    Which ripped my pressure suit.
    There's no way I can make it back,
    The terminal's too far.
    My lungs afire I gasp for breath
    Beneath these brilliant stars.
    No, peace does not come quickly nor
    Can death arrive too soon,
    When you feel your blood start boiling
    On the back side of the moon.
    On the back side of the moon,
    Under miles of ancient rocks,
    The robots scurry to and fro
    Extracting square cut blocks

    Of rare earth metal ores
    (Lanthanides, there're called).
    They all get strapped to rolling stock
    And then by rail are hauled

    To smelters on the surface
    The metals are refined,
    And shuttles haul the ingots to
    Fixed Orbit Station Nine.

    A massive operation and
    Quite lucrative it seems.
    How great is man's ambition and
    How greedy are his dreams.

    While the robots do the heavy work
    Some people are here too,
    For patching up these hunks of junk,
    (The Lunar Fixit Crew).

    Our work is done in terminals.
    But sometimes we must go
    Outside the station's pressure dome,
    Beneath the star light's glow.

    My contract is for seven years.
    I guess that point is moot.
    I dropped a carbide cutting tool 
    Which ripped my pressure suit.

    There's no way I can make it back,
    The terminal's too far.
    My lungs afire I gasp for breath
    Beneath these brilliant stars.

    No, peace does not come quickly nor
    Can death arrive too soon,
    When you feel your blood start boiling
    On the back side of the moon.

     

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    sanctus commented on Back Side of the Moon

    02-22-2011

    Good start...........................................................

    Teardrops commented on Back Side of the Moon

    02-18-2011

    you have my attention great write my friend . Gives you the taste of fear along with adventure . Loved it Marie

    gmcookie

    02/18/2011

    It's sort of the quintessential sci-fi story - dying alone in the blackness of space.... hehe

    Elgey commented on Back Side of the Moon

    02-15-2011

    Ouch!! That's a rough way to go. Good write, though. Do I understand you are soliciting Sci-fi poems for your anthology? I have a few.

    gmcookie

    02/15/2011

    Actually I was working on a volume of my own sci-fi poetry, but you are not the first person who has asked. Let me read what you have. I am not opposed to making this a joint effort if we can get together a body of solid work. But I'd like to see really good stuff... The sci-fi anthologies I've seen in the past haven't been very good. cookie

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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