Arthur Kleinfelt

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    Today's sci-fi poem. Still a bit rough. Bear with me, I'm working on it.

    Arthur Kleinfelt

    Arthur Kleinfelt, common man,
    Soon to be a star,
    Can you see eternity,
    Up there, from where you are?

    Arthur Kleinfelt worked in space,
    On station Beta Eight.
    He suited up to take a walk
    Outside the docking gate.

    The grappling boom on module three
    Was sticking in it's berth.
    He pulled and pried to break it free,
    So high above the Earth.

    That boom snapped like a baseball bat,
    It knocked him hard and true,
    And off he spun toward an Earth
    Of opalescent blue.

    Arthur Kleinfelt, astronaut,
    When you went to space,
    Did you yearn to make the world
    Somehow a better place?

    Did you dream while up on high,
    Or look down from above,
    To feel the swelling in your chest
    Of Universal love?

    Arthur Kleinfelt, see your world,
    With all its majesties,
    With all its passions, dreams and fears,
    Its mountains, plains and seas.

    Yes, see it looming larger now,
    And see it coming near,
    And feel those timid little tugs
    Of outer atmosphere.
     
    Arthur Kleinfelt, silver streak
    Across the evening sky,
    The children point and make a wish,
    One wishes he could fly.

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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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