Frankie Fish

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    Another "Ferry Poem" - written on the ferry on the way to work. This one has settled in a bit, but may get a few more tweaks. This is the true story of my Great Grandfather on my mother's side... As usual, enjoy the read and comments are always appreciated.

    Frankie Fish

    Francesco Pesce was a boy

    In a village by the sea,

    By the deep blue Mare Nostrum

    On the isle of Sicily.

    He was a dreamy headed boy.

    As he walked with stick in hand

    He wrote his name upon the beach

    In the wet and shifting sand.

     

    Oh I never knew Francesco

    Nor got to hold his hand

    And stroll along that ancient sea

    With the shifting white sea sand.

     

    His dreams were there to goad him on

    So when he became a man

    He bought passage on a steamer

    And he left his native land.

    He left behind Palermo

    To sail so far away

    To the promised land of freedom

    To the good old USA.

     

    I never met you brave young man

    Nor got to shake your hand

    And welcome you with open arms

    To this strange and distant land.

     

    Life wasn't just a piece of cake

    As he soon would come to see.

    The new world ran on greed and gold,

    So while stuck in poverty,

    He started running with the mob,

    And there he found his niche.

    He changed his name from Francesco

    To simply "Frankie Fish".

     

    I never saw you Frankie,

    Nor looked into your eyes

    To warn that promises of gold

    Are usually just lies.

     

    They finally put a hit on you,

    On that cold and bitter day.

    You died in your old tenement,

    In a drab and dark hallway.

    They gunned you down there Frankie boy,

    As your life ebbed on the floor,

    You heard your screaming wife and kids

    Behind that hallway door.

     

    I couldn't be there Frankie,

    I hadn't yet been born,

    To comfort your last passage

    In that hallway dark and worn.

     

    But hear me clearly Frankie Fish,

    Wealth is not found in things

    That gold can buy nor silver get,

    But in what family brings.

    Great Grandpas should be past their prime,

    They shouldn't die at twenty nine

    Pursuing some long forgotten wish.

    I would have liked to meet you Frankie Fish.

     

    I never knew you Grandpa Frank,

    Nor sat upon your knee,

    To hear your tales of boyhood's joys

    And Palmero by the sea.

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    Balladeer commented on Frankie Fish

    12-28-2010

    Bravo, sir!!! This is an excellent piece of work. It's a good story, well told. I especially like the way you changed the rhyme scheme in the second to the last stanza. It added a lot more power to the lines. Well done!

    ginga commented on Frankie Fish

    11-26-2010

    cookie, Excellent story telling my dear poet. I enjoyed this tale and you say it so well. Frankie Fish got all washed up. ginga

    Springsize commented on Frankie Fish

    11-26-2010

    You have bravely penned a poem of your grandfather... to speak of the taboo world of bullets for power and dark hallway justice. I would also think, that there may be some very interesting stories to be heard about his family side... his love of his wife and daughter... for not all of his energy was spent running rackets and then, as scrooge mcduck, counting rubies and coins... and there may be some romantic experiences about the man from Palermo... and Most of your verses are exacting... noting that you mentioned this is a work in progress..... so I like that you will polish this one further....

    rsalassi commented on Frankie Fish

    11-24-2010

    With the flavor of a Frankie and Johnny tale meeting up with Slaughter on Tenth Avenue, this poem tells a fascinating story, complete with a moral sadness. Excellent write.

    Chaos128 commented on Frankie Fish

    11-23-2010

    A convincingly compelling tale, expertly executed, G. Are we a product of what we achieve, or the methods by which we achieve it? A true conundrum; had Franky Fish not met a violent, baleful end in a dark hallway, but risen to a dubious plateau of success in his chosen profession (regardless of the pressures that led him to it), would the parable, in truth, be any less tragic? Not good work, G, but great! 10X10!

    gmcookie

    11/23/2010

    Chaos, I suspect we have both known petty criminals and "Ghetto Superstars" who have felt both the flush of success and the sting of defeat in their careers. The question remains - if there had been mainstream opportunities would the outcome have been different? Who knows? I do know that I worked for 7 years counseling drug dealers and gangstas in Juvenile Hall out here in the Oakland area under the auspices of the Omega Boys Club. Omega has graduated over 250 kids from 4 year colleges - the bulk of whom were recruited out of the criminal justice system. People do have the ability to change - especially young people.

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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