The Hand of God

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    This one is settling in now. There are a few lines where the syllable count is off, and in a couple of places I step on a foot. But I don't mind doing that occasionally if it helps carry the flow or message better. There may still be a few tweaks in the future, but it's almost done... hehe Comments and criticisms are always welcome, of course.

    The Hand of God
    There are so many reasons we
    Could sink into despair.
    The world is cold and callous while
    Most folks don't seem to care.
    So greed drives wars and poverty,
    Indifference eats at hope,
    While crime and violence run unchecked,
    And peace is out of scope.
    But yet in growing darkness there
    Is still a point of light.
    A volunteer works freely
    Teaching kids to read and write.
    In Africa strong hearted folks
    Work in a leper's camp,
    While others help flood victims in
    The typhoon's cold and damp.
    A thousand lights, a million more
    Illuminate the land,
    And driving back the gloom of night
    Extend their helping hand.
    O'er all our hopes and dreams tonight
    No evil runs rough shod.
    For in the works and deeds of men
    Is seen the hand of God.
    There are so many reasons we
    Could sink into despair.
    The world is cold and callous while
    Most folks don't seem to care.
    So greed drives wars and poverty,
    Indifference eats at hope,
    While crime and violence run unchecked,
    And peace is out of scope.
    But yet in growing darkness there
    Is still a point of light.
    A volunteer works freely
    Teaching kids to read and write.
    In Africa strong hearted folks
    Work in a leper's camp,
    While others help flood victims in
    The typhoon's cold and damp.
    A thousand lights, a million more
    Illuminate the land,
    And driving back the gloom of night
    Extend their helping hand.
    O'er all our hopes and dreams tonight
    No evil runs rough shod.
    For in the works and deeds of men
    Is seen the hand of God.

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    WordSlinger commented on The Hand of God

    12-18-2010

    Glen, this is well done. A very touching poem. Happy Holidays, WS
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    ginga commented on The Hand of God

    12-18-2010

    cookie, The hand of God is a great hand andyou have done it justice here. ty ginga
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    jeanpnkldyg commented on The Hand of God

    12-18-2010

    When the darkness is acknowledged, the light knows where it must go... I really enjoyed this and hope to read again when it's been tweeked. I don't re-write much (if any) of my stuff, but know that some of it could be. A ten from me as written!
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    Rhymer commented on The Hand of God

    12-13-2010

    Such an excellent well written poem. Enjoyed every stanza of this well crafted piece. I like the ending, where so much trouble and evil exists in the beginning there are still the angels of man extending a helping hand.
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    rsalassi commented on The Hand of God

    12-12-2010

    More of your sentimental softies But well written, friend. I marvel at your talent so making (preaching?) your points with economy and precision. Excellent!
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    gmcookie

    12/13/2010

    If I keep this up I may actually get through your tough hide to the great big soft beating heart I know is in there... Maybe we can go out and save the world together! hehe

    rsalassi

    12/13/2010

    only if I can lead the band!

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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